This comes from one simple thought, yeah certainly inspired by one of my favorite old tunes that was also done very well by Shaggy in reggae style. But this is not a copy of that song at all, it was just an inspiration for expressing this thought.
~ ~ ~
You can say whatever is on your mind
But day after day I somehow find
Myself at the waterfall seeing you smile
When we captured the world mile after mile
Running beside you woulda been grand
But I just loved watching you kick up the sand
But no it was mud, and down by the creek
I'm still there in dreams, hearing music as you speak
Don't you feel it
Don't let time steal it
Day One in the Sun
Life had just begun
For me and my pal
The green-eyed gal
I saw your heart
So don't even start
Trying to tell me to stop
Coz I've frozen the clock
For me and my pal
The green-eyed gal
Say what you want
Just slander my font
With all kinds of rhyme
But I'm frozen in time
With me and my pal
The green-eyed gal
You got it now?
Don't tell me how
I need to let go
Of my last big show
Me and my pal
The green-eyed gal
One day you'll see
The real truth of me
But for now it's just mine
Forever enshrined:
Me and my pal
The green-eyed gal
~ ~ ~
Last edited by MoonRide*r*; 01-24-2011 at 01:50 PM.
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Bump. I actually enjoyed writing this one, hope someone will comment. As I just said in another post, the end would probably change if I could get it arranged to music. It's meant (I think!) to be another epic-techno-trance tune, thus the way it multi-choruses out. But I still don't know if it will work ...
There is no glamour in sudden death, and nobody ever wins a war. :
Rockers Unite! => ROCK 'n' Roll Halls of Fame