My Intended

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  1. MoonRide*r*'s Avatar

    MoonRide*r* said:

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    Was it fate, something called destiny
    Or a random pull from the stars
    That drew you out of a portrait
    And into my open arms?
    Well it doesn't really matter how
    And I've only got one thing to say
    No matter that it couldn't last
    I'll love you till time goes away

    No matter that it ended
    I believe it was meant to be
    It's not what we intended
    But it will outlive eternity
    There's nothing quite as beautiful
    As remembering how it was
    And our names are written in heaven, together,
    And all across the stars

    My darling dry your tears now
    and remember the best we had
    It won't be ours tomorrow
    But does that have to be so bad?
    We had our time in the sunshine
    And that's more than most can say
    I gave you my soul for a moment, but
    I'll love you till time goes away

    No matter that it ended
    I believe it was meant to be
    It's not what we intended
    But it will outlive eternity
    There's nothing quite as beautiful
    As remembering how it was
    And our names are written in heaven, together,
    And all across the stars

    You were My Intended
    Even if it was just for a day
    I gave you my soul for a moment, but
    I'll love you till time goes away
    Last edited by MoonRide*r*; 04-13-2011 at 02:32 AM.
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  2. Hugo Zhor said:

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    Beatiful lyrics with beatiful melancholic mood and nice chorus flow.
    I like these lines and rhymes.

    Quote Originally Posted by MoonRide42 View Post
    No matter that it ended
    I believe it was meant to be
    It's not what we intended
     
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    OneSongWayne said:

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    MoonRide,
    You old hound dog! I didn't know you was a ladies man? This is some great writing, no; awesome writing! You have some beautiful lyrics here. I would tell you this one or that one is my favorite, but I like them all. My wife read it and informed me I had better come up with something just as good. lol I'm trying to talk her into just letting me use yours. All joking asside, this really is as good as I have seen in a long time. Very well done.

    Take care
    Wayne
     
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    MoonRide*r* said:

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    Hehe old hound dog ... well I ain't no John Travolta (or whoever) but I can do alright when I wanna

    Super-mega Thanks to you and your wife both, it's always great to hear from folks who obviously have talent themselves. But most of all I should thank a dear friend who inspired this. As far as sentiment goes this is my favorite of all that I've ever written. And for that reason I'm even more appreciative that you or anyone likes it.

    You take care too my friend and try not be so long between visits. Get busy and write like your wife told you to!
    There is no glamour in sudden death, and nobody ever wins a war.
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    OneSongWayne said:

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    I'm working on it as we speek, but I don't think I can top this. John Travolta... I'll bet you're more like an Elvis Presley! lol
    I'll post this love song as soon as I'm finished with it. I won't let the wife see it till it's done. She says it better be good. Gulp!!!

    Wish me luck
     
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    MoonRide*r* said:

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    LUCK dude sounds like you're gonna need it
    Elvis???? ..... well thank-you-very-muuch
    There is no glamour in sudden death, and nobody ever wins a war.
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    Rockers Unite! =>
    ROCK 'n' Roll Halls of Fame