Ambient House or Minimal-Anthemic Trance; maybe a little hard to read but it rolls in my head. But yeah it still needs a little work....?
Diamonds
Streaks of amber haze try to cover all the signs
Of where we were but can't go back again
Listening to a song I remember what went wrong
Still dreaming... it's never gonna end
Remember how it was and let the golden rays of time
Take you up where you can see the stars
Doesn't matter where we are or that you're no longer mine
Forever's what it always was before
(bridge)
And I've never closed the door
Never closed the door
(chorus 1)
I see you in moonlit dreams
Dancing across time
Starlight in your smile
And diamonds in your eyes
Love that never dies
For the diamonds in your eyes
Kissing eternity in pools of sacred memories
Visions of your fingers laced in mine
Chasing every moment of the beauty that was ours
Diamonds in the desert sands of time
(bridge)
You will forever be mine
Forever baby, mine
(chorus 1)
I see you in moonlit dreams
Dancing across time
Starlight in your smile
And diamonds in your eyes
Love that never dies
For the diamonds in your eyes
(chorus 2)
Where the road divides
What the amber haze hides
I still see your face
Opening love's gate
Starlight in your hair
And diamonds in your eyes
Love that never dies
For the diamonds in your eyes
Diamonds in your eyes
Diamonds in your eyes
(*?)
______________ "Diamonds in your eyes" ... my way of "seeing" the Gold in your Soul. I love you, and that's forever. ______________
Last edited by MoonRide*r*; 07-13-2012 at 02:30 AM.
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I don't know what to say... This is..excellent. My favourite parts are the first bridge and the second chorus at the end which was a pleasant surprise.
@Moon, very good job! On my second reading of it, I also got the "flow" that you meant and heard; that is, I got the rhythm of the song!! It's very nice and easy in rhythm; but more complex in meaning, of course.
One question, Moon . . . Each time I read "diamonds" in the lyrics (and quite beautifully said, mind you); yet you entitled it "Diamond"--does "Diamonds" fit your heart/meaning? (Or even "Diamonds in Your Eyes"?) Just one woman's small offering.
Thanks guys! Days later, when I read it now, I feel a little more satisfied with it than I did at first.
Yeah Frankie I think you're right. My original conception was that I wanted it to be singular, but Diamonds is definitely better as a title. I've changed it
There is no glamour in sudden death, and nobody ever wins a war. :
Rockers Unite! => ROCK 'n' Roll Halls of Fame