Like it Should Be

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  1. MoonRide*r*'s Avatar

    MoonRide*r* said:

    Smile Like it Should Be

    Lyrics for an ambient/minimal Trance or Progressive House score. Co-written together, just letting it flow. Lots of instrumental breaks; figure about a 5-6 minute song.


    He:
    Listening to the wind
    Sighing through the trees
    I'm got you here
    Right next to me

    Your eyes on the sky
    Naming faces in the clouds
    And I wonder why
    I would ever doubt

    2:
    You and me
    Like it should be
    You and me

    She:
    Fingers laced in mine
    Your breath in my ear
    I count all the times
    I trembled to hear

    Your whisper
    Come here, closer
    Tell me again
    Tell me all over

    2:
    It's you and me
    Like it should be
    You and me

    He:
    Baby
    Just let it be
    Now, then again,
    Remembering when

    She:
    when Our lips first touched
    Wanting it so much
    And that's the way
    It will stay

    2:
    You and me
    It'll always be
    You and me

    2:
    You and me
    Is what it should be
    You and me

    Like it should be
    Just you and me
    You and me

    You and me

    (fade)
    Last edited by MoonRide*r*; 10-06-2012 at 02:47 PM. Reason: corrected some of my mistakes in transcribing Tess's lines; etc.
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  2. KathyB said:

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    Very sensual...
    Kathy
     
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    MoonRide*r* said:

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    ... in an almost out-of-body sense, is the intent. If that makes any sense at all

    Thanks for the comment!
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    Doug Denslowe said:

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    As simple as,"You and me,It'll always be,You and me."It really hits the "spot"!I'll always take short and to the point over long drawn out blabber!This is short and sweet,Moon!Good job.
     
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    MoonRide*r* said:

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    Thanks Doug! I gotta say Tess wrote the two best parts of the whole thing:

    Your whisper
    Come here, closer
    Tell me again
    Tell me all over

    And I got up to "Remembering when" and she took it from there, the 4 lines after that.

    The thing is Doug, this is a 50/50 thing like you were asking about a coupla days ago. And yeah, "short and to the point" worked out a whole lot better!
    There is no glamour in sudden death, and nobody ever wins a war.
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    Doug Denslowe said:

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    I knew you could do it!What a reward for a simple question!<(Request)
     
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    Teshka said:

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    Thank you Moon and thank you Kathy and Doug, but you must know that this was so easy! just to let something that you're feeling come out in the simplest words, just grabbing a moment and saying it out loud.

    KathyB yes it does have a sensual side to it and thank you for seeing that side of it, and Moon the way that you finished that thought was right on time as well
    Music is what feelings sound like
    Listen to the Love
    ~♥♥~
     
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    Johnb31 said:

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    Beautiful song love this line and your use of "sighing" paints a picture in my mind.
    "Listening to the wind
    Sighing through the trees
    I'm got you here
    Right next to me"
    There is not enough space or time to truly let the song unwind
     
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    Teshka said:

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    Thank you, and i think it will be ok if i say that when 2 people are apart for "too long" and then they're together again even the simplest things seem the most precious. and thats the rest of the story behind this song
    Music is what feelings sound like
    Listen to the Love
    ~♥♥~
     
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    Doug Denslowe said:

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    Fabulous!That's all I can say after reading this again.