"What she said"

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  1. Cody Baggett said: 08-15-2014 02:45 AM

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    I've told her
    What she meant to me
    A million times before

    She looked down
    gave a bashful nod
    hiding her inner core

    Putting on another mask
    She readied the axe
    Just once more

    Then she said,
    what I meant to her
    "I don't love you anymore"
     

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    Kerri Faye Yates said: 08-16-2014 02:58 AM

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    Short and to the point. I like it. Those words sure pack a punch.
    ~Kerri Faye
     

  3. Alex Robinson said: 08-17-2014 05:34 AM

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    Precise and flows quite naturally!
     

  4. Cody Baggett said: 08-17-2014 01:42 PM

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    It's pretty amazing to see the responses both of you have given. I woke up in the middle of the night and spent about half an hour on this and went back to bed. I guess sometimes things just work. XD