Hey heres some lyrics i wrote the first set my band doesnt like and neither do i but some pple we asked said they were really good so i just need an unbiased opinion and the second set i think is a song already but just tell me if it is here goes dont expect much but be honest:
#1:
Verse 1: You remember the way we danced?
You remember the way we held hands?
Memories take me back home.
Chorus: Every taste every smell, every touch i get of you,
those memories they take me home, they take me back home.
Verse 2: I remember the way you used to laugh,
I remember the way you used to smile,
memories take me back home.
Chorus
Bridge: These words just pass right through me now,
you cant touch, cant hurt me now,
I cant feel you...Anymore.
Cuz you mean nothing to me now,
Just thoughts and visions that I see,
cuz thats all you mean to me,
Just countless memories.
#2:
Verse 1: We risked it all for nothing...
on that night, we took it all away...
we gave up our freedoms,
we gave up our lives,
I never thought that it would end this way!
Chorus: Now Im standing down,
standing tall,
standing free to live it all,
this standing pain aint happening to me,
I never thought that it would end this way!
Thats all i have so far plz post what you think be honest!!!