_SBU VS. Shaadow

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    smoothtung said:

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    Check..
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    I'm in a maajor writers block, like pretty bad. What a time to develope that hah



    _sb is sure insane, big like ..fifteen years ago.
    Me I'm a hurricane, 'eye' is pristine /while fiercest 'flow'.
    ...Lyrics glow ~
    and mine have been 'bright' since sixteen...
    'Atmospheric show' -
    you could say I'm 'fly' like 'slip-streams'...
    'Atlas spirit' so,
    I'm high with 'fire' lines to drop n crackle...
    Wrapped in lyrics wrote,
    This fight will be dire like, ..'lost in battle'.

    ...I'm 'atop'/'in the saddle' ~ a tiger 'higher' addicted..
    ....And you complement the hassle of the, 'higher' listed ^

    I'm entirely gifted.. - ..attire's like the rich kids..
    _sb your inquiry implied sh*t .. - but I missed it..
    I'm intrigued in rising eye-lids ..with trickery.. ~ .. an supple mystique..
    ....'sweet' symmetry - like milk weed distilleries.

    My blitzkrieg witchery cause injury.. ~ ..artillery are syllabary's of poets,
    I'll leave you, ..'mincemeat'.. for the bigotry of delivery/flowin'...
    You're left in misery knowing... You're grueling master's sadistic..
    And history's showing - faster producing massacre statistics...

    This basterd emits a mystic touch but combusts it...
    THIS rapper spits sick, and MUST - its what I'm in love with...
    Last edited by smoothtung; 01-14-2012 at 02:32 AM.
  3. _SBU said:

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    Voting hasn't finished on my first battle yet, but ok.
    _SBU VS Shaadow/Smoothtung.


    ..That was basic. you seem to be aggitated.
    your big words only make points if you're scrabble playing.

    it's accidental when you give words new meanings.
    you bit me once, now I have to spoonfeed it.
    you've dishonoured all that you come from.
    you bit my lines and chewed the 'Smooth-tung' off.

    he treats rap as a second wife.
    didn't go in hard, but still he entered twice.
    ..used two accounts to battle here, he knew he'd need an extra try.
    that wasn't what I meant when I said to 'get a life'.

    I bring something of substance to light. you just Shaadow it.
    we've battled twenty times before.. Shadow: he"S-had-0-w"ins.

    you change your name but should've stayed untitled.
    you use two names but can barely claim one style.
    Shadow's behind the times, like a sundial.
    son dials.. calls me out and sounds like a young child.
    oldschool or taking it back to it's infancy?
    you've got flow but you lack in consistancy.
  4. _SBU said:

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    Quote Originally Posted by shaadow View Post
    I'm in a maajor writers block, like pretty bad. What a time to develope that hah
    the writers' block'll go quickly if you don't worry about it.. I got worried and tried to prepare for battling you yesterday and got terrible writers' block, spent nearly 90mins on writing absolutely nothing useable. feeling more confident today though. stay on it.
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    Yea I did 'last minute' edit to the verse above before you dropped, and ended up rewriting more than half of it. Thing took over an hour.
    Getting better now, came up with this pretty quick..
    Win to you though. It's hard to create punches that work for you..


    Im ahead of the race, I've skills to make it.
    I'm'pressing' the game ...still... you disgrace it..
    Titles mean nothing, yet you think its my handcraft?
    No, really.. - the f*cking 'shadow'.. is from 'Backdraft'..

    'Mad' though? Ill-forms can't reach my sensations...
    And 'stillborn's are dead twenty weeks past gestation.
    I sense aggravation densly ..'emblazoned'..
    ..an if you doubt my intentions.. that is 'decorated'..

    We've been here before dude, and script says I'm super,
    You'll be ..forlorn soon.. cuz I'm better than you were..
    You've been gone awhile, and you think that's okay dude?
    I'm sorry ..'defiled's the way Ill portray you..

    Id slay you,
    but unicorns kinda stifle flows frankly...
    I'm quite fond of 'wild horses' ~ 'Nights in Rodanthe'..
    I'm no 'xanthe' but writing is something I cherish,
    I see cherubs in fancy type toting serifs..
    ...Like Deris plants grow, ('serif's are letter sides..)
    And 'Deris' plants are known to parent insecticide...
    Last edited by smoothtung; 01-14-2012 at 04:21 AM.
  6. _SBU said:

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    why even try with your disasterous wordplay?
    I'll strike my own Shaadow, and cause earthquakes.
    I'm higher so when I'm pissing on you, you see rainbows.
    when I hit Shadow punches 'land' like Donkey Kong. D.K. you decay though.

    shadow's transparent rap plans'll seem useless.
    you drew with 'Who' and you barely de'Duce'd it.
    I said you are 'Who're well matched. novelty probably.
    "you and Who're well matched" -drop the apostraphe.

    you make claims with no weight and change names after them.
    you bury your roots like a very astute gardener.
    you seemed to think you had a chance. should've known it wasn't likely.
    now the fear grows in Shadow and climbs like poison ivy.

    think you're a hot lyricist? were you not listening?
    you're Blowing in the wind; harm-monikers like Bob Dylan did.

    I've messaged him, regretted it, he makes me bored as hell.
    you're truely 2D, shaallow, just a shaadow of your former self
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    So you did have some useable material from the 90 minutes ha. Nice drops