Don't Go

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  1. MoonRide*r*'s Avatar

    MoonRide*r* said:

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    Another 30-second wonder? No not a "wonder" at all, but it's another speed-write, if 5-6 minutes can be called "speed". Medium-slow beat but kinda crisp on enunciations, and several pauses in the music between verses, bridges, etc.

    Thanks to Katie and robberbaron for the inspiration, your lyrics plus random comments

    Please Don't Go

    I miss you more
    Than I ever said
    Coz you want my heart
    to be "dead" to you
    Coz I thought 1-and-1
    Was more than two
    Coz I couldn't believe
    What you said was true

    So why do I
    Still sing this song
    When time and again
    You said I'm wrong
    To love you with
    Each breath I take
    Since I didn't believe
    Your words weren't fake

    Well I sing

    Because ...

    You beat my heart
    And breathe my soul
    Without your love
    I'm frozen cold
    I can't even move
    You own me so
    I'm zero minus you
    So ...

    Please. don't. go

    Please-don't-go

    (instr.)

    I want to see
    You smile again
    And tell me how
    Your morning went
    I just don't care
    What went before
    I only want
    To love you more

    Because ...

    You beat my heart
    And breathe my soul
    Without your love
    I'm frozen cold
    I can't even move
    You own me so
    I'm zero minus you
    So ...

    Please. don't. go

    Please-don't-go

    (instr.)

    I'll hide it well
    If you'll just stay
    There's nothing left
    For me to say
    I only want
    Your love again
    Insane I know
    But please, don't, go

    Because ...

    You beat my heart
    And breathe my soul
    Without your love
    I'm frozen cold
    I can't even move
    You own me so
    I'm zero minus you
    So please don't go

    Just please don't go

    Please don't go

    (...)

    ~.~
    There is no glamour in sudden death, and nobody ever wins a war.
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  2. RobberBaron said:

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    I particularly love this bit "I want to see
    You smile again
    And tell me how
    Your morning went
    I just don't care
    What went before
    I only want
    To love you more"

    I know you already have a name for this, but I was wondering if "Zero Minus You" would be a good name?
     
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    Katie13 said:

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    I like this... it's full of longing and the lyrics are great
    "If you were me, then I'd be you, and if I were you, I'd hide somewhere faraway..."
     
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    MoonRide*r* said:

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    Thanks both of you and I'm always really pleased when something can come out so simple. And RB, about the title, obviously I was confused coz I gave it 2 slightly different names lol ... I wonder if "Zero Minus You" might be a bit too campy-theatrical or something, but what about just "Zero Minus" or just "Zero" .... I dunno, I might need to pull out my dart board for this one
    There is no glamour in sudden death, and nobody ever wins a war.
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    ROCK 'n' Roll Halls of Fame