The Risk

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    Zachre said:

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    She needs to pick and choose so we can go about
    But she can’t, she’s afraid to lose, but doesn’t want to miss out
    Or wonder ‘what if’ she hadn’t played it safe, and gave me her combination
    To unlock her heart, and steal it from that abomination

    The one who’s hand is in hers, while mine is making a fist, trying not to get pissed
    I’m doin my best to understand why she lets him treat her like this
    She doesn’t know better, but she could if her fear would let her
    But it has her paralyzed like a pair of Medusa’s eyes, letting her see past his lies, past my tries and cries to make her real eyes realize where reality lies.

    But what if I’m wrong and she was happier all along.
    What if I don’t meet her expectations, and it doesn’t work out,
    And she begins to doubt what I brought about,
    And it’s all my fault, I opened her vault and emptied it out.

    It’s a risk, but I’m not afraid to take it,
    Because its worth it if we make it,
    If she leaves I couldn’t just rake it,
    This must be love, I can’t mistake it.
  2. snickwills said:

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    Quality lyrics mate! Very clever rhymes with a good story and theme behind it! Nice post!
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    Zachre said:

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    Anyone want to help me on how I would go about making a proper chorus and what not? I don't know much about proper rhythm, in technical terms anyways.
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    PointZero said:

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    Great lyrics!
  5. khit said:

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    nice lyric, i understand the scenario and i'm impress with the combination of the words