"U"n"d"e"r"n"e"a"t"h"T"h"e"W"a"v"e"s"

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  1. BackInBlack's Avatar

    BackInBlack said:

    Default "U"n"d"e"r"n"e"a"t"h"T"h"e"W"a"v"e"s"

    Who am I?
    A paper man in the furnace room
    Do or die?
    I plead guilty, the verdict's doom
    Suicide?
    No, I cannot abide the coward's way out
    Who decides
    When to end this endless f#####g drought?

    ( Because I need... )

    One for the sorrow
    And one for the pain
    One for tomorrow
    And one to keep me sane
    Another one to swallow
    To help me through the day
    One more to follow
    The one I just had to take
    Feeling so (D@/\/\n) hollow
    Yet still I also feel great

    Although we all know
    It's a double edged blade
    The cuts may be shallow
    But they still bleed underneath the waves...

    Underneath The Waves
    Underneath The Waves

    Who am I?
    I'm half the man I never really was
    Terrified
    Of everything that he ever does
    Crucified?
    Yes, by my own hands over and over
    Where am I?
    I can't remember the last time I was sober

    ( And still I need... )

    One for the sorrow
    And one for the pain
    One for tomorrow
    And one to keep me sane
    Another one to swallow
    To help me through the day
    One more to follow
    The one I just had to take
    Feeling so (D@/\/\n) hollow
    Yet still I also feel great

    Although we all know
    It's a double edged blade
    The cuts may be shallow
    But they still bleed underneath the waves...

    Underneath The Waves
    Underneath The Waves
    That's where my mind has always stayed
    Underneath The Waves
    Underneath The Waves
    I'm desperate and my nerves are frayed

    Running on fumes
    The war always resumes
    I'm not gunning to lose
    But in this place of tombs
    I am falling and stumbling backwards
    With every single step...

    ( So I gotta have... )

    One for the sorrow
    And one for the pain
    One for tomorrow
    And one to keep me sane
    Another one to swallow
    To help me through the day
    One more to follow
    The one I just had to take
    Feeling so (D@/\/\n) hollow
    Yet still I also feel great

    Although we all know
    It's a double edged blade
    The cuts may be shallow
    But they still bleed underneath the waves...

    Underneath The Waves
    Underneath The Waves
    That's where my mind has always stayed
    Underneath The Waves
    Underneath The Waves
    I'm desperate and my nerves are frayed
     
  2. BackInBlack's Avatar

    BackInBlack said:

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    Damn. I thought surely someone would comment on this one.
     
  3. tylerflipz said:

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    Wow, this is so good, I started putting it to music in my head, and it harmonized beautifully. The way this song is constructed harmonizes really well with how i think it would go. That's something I need to work on.
     
  4. BackInBlack's Avatar

    BackInBlack said:

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    Thank you tylerflips. I appreciate the criticism.
     
  5. Kerri Faye Yates's Avatar

    Kerri Faye Yates said:

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    Sometimes, I just want to hug your lyrics for being so awesome. Thanks for that.
    ~Kerri Faye
     
  6. BackInBlack's Avatar

    BackInBlack said:

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    Why thank you! Here's a hug just for you!
     
  7. Kerri Faye Yates's Avatar

    Kerri Faye Yates said:

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    Yay, I'm special!
    ~Kerri Faye