My First Song :)

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  1. herminajisty said:

    Default My First Song :)

    Verse 1 :
    I was reminiscing, about the way you look at me,
    The way the emerald green came in, and crept into the back of my mind.
    Just the way you smile, You send chills down my spine.
    And my heart skips a beat when you're holding my hand and,
    Not even a thousand kites can soar as fast as my heart can.

    Chorus:

    Cause we're dancing in the moonlight and kissing in the rain,
    And the clock is ticking, I'll never be the same.
    And in my, in my mind your beautiful,
    How hard is it to see, our love is meant to be.

    Verse 2:
    Yesterday, you showed up at the parking lot,
    Who would've guessed it would've been my place of dreams.
    And now we're head to head in our own battlefield,
    And we learn how to get along, and the flaws of being strong,
    Cause now and forever the world is ours so let's go, let's go

    Chorus:
    Dancing in the moonlight and kissing in the rain,
    And the clock is ticking, I'll never be the same.
    And in my, in my mind your beautiful,
    Oh honey oh why can't you see, you're just so perfect for me.

    Bridge:
    And I don't want this daydream to end.
    Or for reality to hit like a twister and ruin what we have.
    So baby just stay strong, cause if this is right I don't wanna be wrong.

    And now we're laying in the moonlight, your arms around me,
    The whole world stops when you said to me,
    What we have, what we have is beautiful, so rare and magical.

    Chorus:
    Flashback to dancing in the moonlight and its pouring rain,
    We found our love to never be the same.
    So baby know that you’re beautiful,
    So smart and sensible.


    Cause we're dancing in the moonlight and kissing in the rain,
    And the clock is ticking, I'll never be the same.
    And in my, in my mind your wonderful,
    Now that we see, our love is meant to be.

    Please tell me what you think, sorry if it sucks because it's my first try :/ thank you so much <3
    Last edited by herminajisty; 07-26-2014 at 09:25 AM.
     
  2. Jim Colyer's Avatar

    Jim Colyer said:

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    I'm always curious about someone's first song. It sure beats my first one.