Independance Song

Hey this never really happened, but it was inspired by what I would do if this guy I was totally love with ever crawled back to me, which he never did, so this song's kinda my way of getting the satisfaction.

There's no refunds and no returns
You can't cross a bridge that's burned
Without an apology

You tell me that the storm has past
No sense in polishing broken glass
When it can still make you bleed

Chorus:
'Cause this is my independance song
And you don't seem to understand
You bought the doll* now pay the cost
'Cause I ain't no one's back up plan
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I won't just forgive and forget
You Broke my heart,you should let it mend
You owe me that much

You stole my hopes, you stole my dreams
You crushed my heart into smithereens
One time is enough

Chorus:

'Cause this is my independance song
And you don't seem to understand
You bought the doll now pay the cost
'Cause I ain't no one's back up plan
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You seem to think I'm automatic
Our connection you should unattach it
I'm better off without you

I hate how your so inconsistent
One day were close the next were distant
But I don't care what you do

Chorus:

'Cause this is my independance song
And you don't seem to understand
You bought the doll now pay the cost
'Cause I ain't no one's back up plan
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I don't wanna be an afterthought
I should be a real concern
Not gonna take what I got
If it's something I haven't earned

Chorus:

'Cause this is my independance song
And you don't seem to understand
You bought the doll now pay the cost
'Cause I ain't no one's back up plan
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*This how I'm refering to the girl he picked over me. She was blonde with the typical "Barbie" kind of personality.

copyright 2010, Ivy Thorn

i like this...some of your lines are two short in my opinion...the verse lines that only have 3 lines try making 4. and make that line rhyme. just my opinion.