Yes it is fine he will get it/ understand it. I think it's better that you try and writes things on your own so it's your own effort, it comes from the heart that way : D
and this is how you say the other two lines
dua te te them qe...
shum e vleresoj gjith ate qe e ben per mua, dhe keshtu me fal per argumentin qe kishim dije
shum te faleminderoj...
A te pyes vall je ne Shqiperi ala, apo ndodhesh ne Amerike? Une tash jam ne Amerike.