My first ever guitar tab.

So I've been playing as a hobby for about four years now. I'm not that good and I mostly play to ease boredom, but I wrote this tab just now that I think isn't too bad. What d'ya think?

Key: h = hammer-on
p = pull-off
| = pick down
^ = pick up
b = bend
4/4
E|-----------------------------------------------------
A|-3---3-------5-0-0------------8-------3------------------3b-------3h0
D|-3h5-5-55555--7-7-7777h8-10---7-3-5-- (Repeat x3)--3-5------2-5
G|-----------------------------------------------------
B|-----------------------------------------------------
e|-----------------------------------------------------
----------|^|^||-----|^|^

E|---------------------------------------------00000000000000-------00000000000000-----------
A|-----------------------------0-------0-------2222222222222222h3p2222222222222225p2h3p2
D|-3---1---7---3---7---3---3332---3332---333-22222222222222-------22222222222222-----------
G|-5---3---9---5---9---3---3332---3332---333-------------------------------------------------------------------
B|-----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
e|-----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
(Repeat after first "022" x4)----------------------|||^|^||||^|^|---------|||^|^||||^|^|


And that's all I've wirtten so far. Sorry the spacing sucks (it's the site, not me), but a good palyer can figure it out pretty easily.