Reborn

The corporeal void within my soul
Withers like a dying coal
For the fire that's burns
Is the fire that turns
My soul to coals
My soul to coals


Warm the water with this coal
Pour it forth into my soul
Release me from the fire that burns
Deliver me from all it turns
To ashes
To ashes
I feel reborn

Deep!

That "burns-turns" rhyme is a real earworm! Good work, I like it!

You began the poem quickly

Old thread, I know but just wanted to say that I really like that first line man! Nice choice of words, great work!