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Not sure if I posted this before, but just curious at what criticism it'll get.

Let’s start jumping for the sky
Gravity is just an obstacle to defy.
You say the sky’s the limit. Why?
Today we will pry in the sky and try to fly.

We’ll jump for the moon, if we miss it’ll be alright.
Because pretty soon, we’ll be able to kiss the starlight.
With gravity no longer an obstacle, the universe is yours for the taking
So grow stronger with each leap for mankind, your future is yours for the making.

Never let someone tell you “You can’t do that”
They’re just talking to themselves, so see through that.

Your potential is water, you can have it in a bottle or tap it.
Let it pour from a faucet indefinitely, or cap it.
Dehydration is the downfall of our nation
Precipitation will be our vaccination

Obviously needs some editing, but I like it haha.

Bump. That bad huh? :P

It can be either a fun, or serious song, and I like that. Sure it needs some work, but it's nice to see some songs on here that aren't overly thought out! (I am a good example of that haha.)