Jfam: 'The Script - For the First Time' rap cover

I saw British rapper 'Wretch 32' cover this song at a music festival so I thought i'd also give it a go. For the chorus of this song the only original bit left would be the "Ooooo ooo ooo ooo oooo ooo oooo ooo ooooh" bit which start straight after my rap says "for the first time". Hope you like it

For the First Time, Originally by 'The Script'

(Verse 1)
You're the best thing that I've had, the best I'll ever know
A welcome compassion, a warmth from down below
I'd never had a life, now a life I never had
And now that I've had it, I'll never take it back
I'll hold you in my arms, let me show my love
I want another chance so i'mma pray to God above
I'd have one wish, time alone
Our love's so sweet, we should leave it set in stone
When I first met ya, a point of no return
I never knew a date like this, the love that I would burn
You took me to a place, past the wildest of my dreams
So when I knew you'd left me, you left me begging "please"
I look into a mirror, look back to my past
I was with you forever, back when you were mine
Let me start over, let us let it last
And just meet again, For the First Time

(Verse 2)
You said that you should go, but I'm try'na work it out
I love it when I'm with you and I've never had a doubt
Heart to heart, mouth to mouth
We share the secrets only we can know about
I hold you in my arms, you know I'm never letting go
I'm busy loving you and I'm in love forever so
I'd choose time, time alone
You offer me your life, I'd take the line your gonna throw
When times are hard, when times are getting bad
Recession or the worse, or just when you're getting sad
I'll be with you forever, the angel from above
Forgive me for my eagerness, the feeling for your love
I look into a mirror, look back to my past
I was with you forever, back when you were mine
Let me start over, let us let it last
And just meet again, For the First Time

(Verse 3/Bridge)
When I first met ya, a point of no return
I never knew a date like this, the love that I would burn
I'll be with you forever, the angel from above
Forgive me for my eagerness, the feeling for your love
I look into a mirror, look back to my past
I was with you forever, back when you were mine
Let me start over, let us let it last
And just meet again, For the First Time

Any opinions?

You should actually get the instrumental and do it audio, its always hard to picture how a remix sounds. It is lyrical sound though

Well, i did write it to the beat. Trouble is, i can't get a beat with the bit of the original sound i want still left in and i tried Audacity vocal remover which didn't work but tbh i am a real amateur at that sort of thing. I've tried other ways but i can never get the bits in the right spot :L So, until i find a way i'm afraid the only way you'll know where the chorus, as it were, comes in is by listening to the real song and hearing it. Unless you meant me record over it, which is also a problem cos i have no decent mic and stuff

For the beat just look up "For the first time Instrumental with hook" Should come up. Too lazy to check myself haha. And any mic should be fine, not grading on static quality

Lol, and i tried that at first. Trouble is the song isn't widely rap covered and no one wants to make one with a hook in it. The best I could find was the instrumental i found, and there were only like, 2 of them on the web :L and I guess I'll record it on some sort of mic when I'm free but I'm pretty busy at the moment