just a "off the top of my head" - er should i expand?

So F**k this,
i'll cross my heart,
and i'll hope you die,
but Karma's a cuelty,
so you'll remain alive,
the answers are clear,
and my hand is near,
so now,
i'll say goodbye.

think i should builld this into a full song?

I think you should. I think you've got something to work with there - there's some venom behind those lyrics, Eams! Go for it, I say!

So F**k this,
i'll cross my heart,
and i'll hope you die,
but Karma's a cuelty,
so you'll remain alive,
the answers are clear,
and my hand is near,
so now,
i'll say goodbye.

unforunate to say,
but goodbyes are all,
but to late,
there's no reason,
for your treason,
and your words,
only sting forever.

a life in your hands,
you tossed it about,
defiling a heart,
that was already broken,
star-struck, i was stricken,
blinder than the pitchest black.

you've forced my hand,
so i right with this pen,
of your manipulation,
your desicration,
you abomination.

with a mind scared by pain,
i'll stick it out,
to see your tears rain,
there will be no end in sight,
for an eternity,
this land will be scarred by fright.

Wow... Feeling some big angst there