This Blade Of Yours

[Verse 1]
All your life, you’ve held back your tears,
Hoped someone would walk by and notice you’re here,
But all your life you’ve end up hurt and alone,
And one day you realized that you’re on your own,

For your friend in this blade,
For a heart withered away,
For the mountains you have to climb every day,

[Chorus]
Bleeding blood red, you’re crying, such a beautiful mess on the floor,
Inside you’re dead, and outside you can’t bring yourself to care anymore,
And in your head, this blade whispers the sweetest words of an untold war,
A war you wage for this blade of yours,

[Verse 2]
You’ve hid in shame and worn an intricate disguise,
And if they’ve ever taken notice, they still cast you aside,
This world of theirs has no place for someone like you,
So set fire to your skin, spill your blood for their truth,

For your friend in this blade,
For a life slowly draining away,
For the battles you have to fight every day,

[Chorus]
Bleeding blood red, you’re crying, such a beautiful mess on the floor,
Inside you’re dead, and outside you can’t bring yourself to care anymore,
And in your head, this blade whispers the sweetest words of an untold war,
A war you wage for this blade of yours,

[Bridge]
You found a friend you thought you’d never gain,
A friendship that’s trapped you in chains,
That steals the blood from your veins,

“Whisper sweet words into my ear,” you’ve begged,
And this blade told you a story of tears, dripping in red,
You’ve etched these words into your skin until you bled,

[Chorus]
Bleeding blood red, you’re crying, such a beautiful mess on the floor,
Inside you’re dead, and outside you can’t bring yourself to care anymore,
And in your head, this blade whispers the sweetest words of an untold war,
A war you wage for this blade of yours,


Hey people of the website! I'm totally new and don't know a thing about this place. It would be wonderful if someone could help me around.
Um... I just wanted to know what people would think about my lyrics.
Also, if you are feeling depressed and suicidal, please don't harm yourself. I can't promise it will get better but I hope you will stick around just in case it might. Talk to someone, anyone, talk to me. Just don't hurt yourself, please.

I've learned that when writers produce songs like this, they are generally talking about themselves. Bob Dylan's "Like A Rolling Stone" is a good example.

This is hauntingly beautiful.

I really like this song. I'd only make a few suggestions if they were welcome and they wouldn't really be changing the song. But if not, I still love the song. Great work.

Of course they are welcome. I would love you hear your suggestions.