hey guys this is the first song i have ever writting and i was thinking i should get some feedback, thanks

VERSE 1

I don’t no what u think of me
But when u glance my way
I see a catalyst meant to be

nothing still means nothing
So I can’t help but think,
That nothing was something
Before this whole thing

To bad I hate your guts
And you ****ed it all up

can u arguer what’s worse?
i said I don’t
you said u do
but when its yes no yes
there’s no way he knew

VERSE 2

to bad you said heads and it came up tails
it couldn’t have been that close
its like you wanted to fail

good thing u got it wrong
what the **** were u thinking
your life is over now
what the **** were u thinking

**** what you were
and **** what you’ve become

can u arguer what’s worse?
i said I don’t
you said u do
but when its yes no yes
There’s no way he knew

Verse 3

If you weren’t popping and rocking
Maybe id respect you
But you took the easy way out again
So **** your new friend

I thought I saw an angle that night
But I now no better
An angle your not
Because angles don’t have daggers

Because angles don’t have daggers
angles don’t have daggers
Because angles don’t have daggers!

can u still arguer what’s worse?
i said I don’t
you said u do
but when its yes no yes
There’s no way I knew

you took the easy way out again
So **** you !
and **** your new friend

can u arguer what’s worse?
i said I don’t
you said u do
but when its yes no yes
There’s no way u knew
I have your dagger
Just me and your dagger





all feedback is welcome. thankz