Shivery

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  1. ElegantButler said:

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    Shivery

    Closed and locked, the heart of Bryce
    Fragile treasure encased in ice

    A silver key of things unfelt
    May cause the coldest ice to melt

    Calculations replace dreams
    As does tech the lover's schemes

    When all around him lie impure
    His chastity still does endure

    What lover's touch and words suffice
    To melt the frigid heart of Bryce?
     
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    curiosity_kills_the_cat said:

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    Nice Elizabethan touch....though I don't understand the title, is it the coldness of Bryce's heart that sends them shivers?
     
  3. jamielood said:

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    Quote Originally Posted by curiosity_kills_the_cat View Post
    Nice Elizabethan touch....though I don't understand the title, is it the coldness of Bryce's plr heart that sends them shivers?

    I think you're right. In any case I like it a lot.
    Last edited by jamielood; 01-26-2014 at 11:54 PM.