The empty moon

The empty moon



The empty moon was floating
without a world
and the people dancing
within


a
body
bending
night
sk
y



And we were two, just you and I
Thus the void corresponding
with your presence, something you said..

"as if communicating, transmitting thoughts
I know you by mere gestures"

And there it was
That empty expression
foraging between
its space...


















































There's something eerie and overwhelming
when I walk alone with you

yor tapestry looming
ever so still

I'm certainly not the one to speak about poems ...
but this is a beyond doubt excellent presentation of a poem!

Very nice! Your choice of words and placement really paint a clear picture. Keep it up Eccer!

Thanks all, I guess it turned out better than expected! If there's anything you guys want me to comment on, please leave a link