AllTheLyrics :), please Review

HI,
I would like you to review my lyrics and I have another ask, I also want you to listen to my accent if you like it or it's to "heavy" for you. TNX

Lyrics:
All she said you and me
All she said meant to be
All she gave me reason to bealive
When she said she will never live

Where are you now
What are you doing to me
Where are you now

All she said hold me tiet
When we stay up all night
All she said trust in me
All I have Is what she said to me

Where are you now
What are you doing to me
Where are you now

The wind you feel I feel it to
The sky you see Is not just for you
We are on the same road Don't turn your head away
Maybe some day....

Where are you now
What are you doing to me
Where are you now

The song:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BUmkbv-v-vI

TNX

You do what a lot of writers do when they post here;they write their lyrics,then on YouTube they aren't written.if you had them in both places,I could read along as you sang!You are a star.......you should audition on one of the many "music shows" if possible.Yeah,you have an accent,so did Elvis!

I still love the video.All Da Best with it.Your Lyric Bro.(~;Yrral Mallik of Songramp aka Larry Gordon Killam creator of Facebook Group Songwriters Unite over 4000 members;~)