amaryn: my poems of 2014

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  1. Doug Denslowe's Avatar

    Doug Denslowe said:

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    The above nameless poem is great!"Ignoring nature and the rest"is something I think about often.In my song "Real Problems" I address this as well.But you keep on pounding it into our heads;as if it'll do any good..........well,let's hope so!(sad,but true)
    Love the blue font!
     
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    Paradise

    don't sleep now
    'cause I want to get closer to Paradise
    with you
    we can do it
    if we'll share that moment
    together
     
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    amaryn said:

    Default crinoline petticoats

    whirling in circles
    crinoline petticoats
    bedazzle my eyes
    seasons
    what would we be
    without you?
    Last edited by amaryn; 11-20-2014 at 11:51 PM. Reason: correcting
     
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    amaryn said:

    Default dream of a relationship

    she had seen through the eyes of her lover
    she had seen that the view was absurd
    she knew that the stars laughed above her
    but she just couln't let him be hurt

    she had hoped that one day he would leave her
    he would see for himself the truth
    she just didnot want to deceive him
    or tell him a cheap excuse


    when the day came it just had to happen
    as she couldno longer resist
    she gave him a present she knew
    he liked: the composer Lizt

    he kissed her and said she would always
    be a part of his life
    as a friend he just couln't have her
    as
    he knew she could not be his wife
     
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    Doug Denslowe said:

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    See below......this disappeared,when I reposted,it reappeared!
     
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    Crinoline Petticoats..........love it!(I looked up Crinoline.......good one!)
    Dream of a Relationship............Fantastic!
     
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    amaryn said:

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    hi Doug. my appreciation on Forum is immense as only you comment anymore. I wonder why this apathy is so enormous...BUT: thanks, flobro.
     
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    amaryn said:

    Default luring winter

    winter gets up
    slowly
    there is no hurry
    it seems
    as we huddle
    in a cool wind
    and stroll
    through fallen leaves
    friends forever
    ©amaryn
     
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    amaryn i've read most if not all of your thread, even though apparently i've never commented and i feel a little embarrassed about that now. But you have a poet's soul and it's almost like i don't really want to violate the soulful solitude of what you write here. But how can you know that anyone appreciates your musings if it's never said? I do read this whenever it pops up in 'New Posts' and from now on i'll at least click the thanks button even if i don't want to spoil your continuity with any kind of comment

    and just by the way, winter isn't getting up so slowly around here, it seems to be in a really big hurry right now
    Music is what feelings sound like
    Listen to the Love
    ~♥♥~
     
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    thiis , Teshka, has been such a pleasant surprise. I thankk you most cordially and my solitude
    is not as grave as you may think. I just think a lot and make observations, but so do you!
    I'll be most happy to know yoyr presence. Btw: if you like to read
    poetry of mine on my blog: www.wachtuiltje.tumblr.com. There you can also find pics and quotations. Welcome.
     
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    amaryn said:

    Default death of nephew

    death stood at the door
    told him it was time to go
    he was not ready
     
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    amaryn said:

    Default a message

    can we say it is never too late
    solving problems can always wait
    is it a matter rather, my friend
    of sticking your head in the sand?

    we seem right now in a terrible mess
    masses of trouble, buried in stress
    we want to flee or at least to postpone
    leave troublespots on their own

    get up and don't turn your back
    on them now
    though solving tensions seems frightful somehow
    tolerance is what we need most today
    let us be brave , find a way
    ©
    Last edited by amaryn; 11-21-2014 at 01:01 PM.
     
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    the wonder of light
    at the start of the day
    seems nothing special
    for most anyway
    we seem to get used
    to such wonderful facts
    hardly a soul who reacts

    but if darkness would stay
    and there wouln't be light
    what would we say
    if there were only night
    could we still breath
    embrace our friends
    or witness how everything ends?
     
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    amaryn said:

    Default wonderland

    dreams
    pushing us towards the edge of reality
    lifting a veil of wonderland
    where roaming would make us
    entirely happy

    dreams
    shaking us to the bone
    showing us no mercy of lies
    to be used for excusing ourselves
    time after time

    dreams
    you and me
    sharing our nights
    huddling together
    for protection
    Last edited by amaryn; 11-21-2014 at 01:01 PM.
     
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    amaryn said:

    Default tthe long walk

    she sat near the window
    with in her lap
    a cat purring loudly
    a llittle mishap
    for she longed for silence
    she needed so much
    the only way
    to keep in touch
    with what she believed in
    a few of her dreams
    in danger of loosing them
    or so it seemed
    she suddenly got up
    the cat got a fright
    decided to go
    for a long walk outside
    and in the forest
    she found her peace
    as nothing she loved more
    than beautiful trees
    when entering her house
    she returned to her chair
    her cat didn't purr
    but was waiting there
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    amaryn said:

    Default story of a friend

    the man had lived
    a troubled life
    lost his children
    lost his wife
    he said he had himself to blame
    for the mess he'd been in
    such a shame


    he had no job,
    he had no home
    a dog he was
    booze was his bone
    but one day meeting a new friend
    he knew what friendship meant

    and finally
    he realized
    the fight goes on
    still day and night
    but one day he says
    -and that's sure
    he won't go back no more








    Last edited by amaryn; 11-21-2014 at 02:50 PM.
     
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    amaryn said:

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    what about it?
    always the last word
    pushing your opinion
    in front of our face
    like a dirty cloth
    dominant behaviour
    searching for submission
    you won't get
    instead
    you could try
    to be positive
    and gentle
    you have only got this life
    to live
    remember?
     
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    amaryn said:

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    dance dance dance

    dance dance dance
    getting up
    feel the trance
    ready for a quick romance
    fall in love with rhythm

    dance dance dance
    making turns
    feel the trance
    no, no time for romance
    cause I am, she isn't

    on the move all the time
    rhythm rhythm you are mine
    hear these basslines, wow the drums
    suddenly she comes


    baby, baby, join the dance
    move on fast, feel the trance
    if you want a small romance
    hear my heartbeat, rhythms
     
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    Dance ,dance,dance reminds me of the Steve Miller song of the same name.What about it........love it!Story of a friend.........great poem.The long walk.......what was the mishap?I hope it didn't pee on its owner!wonderland........trippy!A message.........my favorite of this batch.