Something

Have I overdone it at the very end? All suggestions appreciated.

You can tell me you love me
But the way is not the words
Maybe it’ll help you
If I say what I’m lookin’ for

I want something honest
Something more real
Something so true
That I can see what you feel
Know… what you’re thinking
Know… what you fear
Know what you dream of
And what you hold dear

I can see it in your eyes
You(‘ve) got something to say
But do you really have to?
When with words people play
I want something more honest
I want something more real
I want something so true
That you stand there revealed

You can tell me you love me
But the words aren’t the way
You may say it’s forever
Not just games people play
May-be it will help you
If I say what I’m looking for
I want what changes the world
I want the key to the door

You can tell me you love me
But the words aren’t the way
You can say that you care
You can say that you’ll stay

May-be it will help you
If I say what I’m looking for
I’m looking for something
I almost had once before
But I’m looking for something
That’s as much mine as yours

Yeah, I’m looking for something
Something as much mine as yours


Justin Cayce (C) 2015

Some concrete images are in order.