Voices

I'm new here. Felt like sharing my new songs.
Here is a rap-rock song for all of us who feel that there is more to the everyday grind.


VOICES

I'm waking up every morning with this voice in my head
It's telling me to get a move on till the whole day is spent
It's talking to me, telling me that everyday just goes fine
But in reality I feel like I'm just wasting my time

I'm doing fine with everyday until this fine has ran out
Just hanging by a tiny thread until illusions give out
Remembering to be religious when it do seem to count
I hope this doesn't catch me in my sleep or give me a haunt

Just come on down and do the rat race till the sunshine is gone
Just keep on moving, keep on working till you feel like you're done
You cant give up and cant give in, The voice keeps egging you on
You cant complain, you cant submit, just keep on walking and moan

I started questioning this voices that I hear in my head
Resisting all of those emotions that I've tried not to fed
But life is pulling me to line up just like everyone else
A traffic jam where everyone seems to be saving themselves


Chorus:
Hot damn, I feel I'm doing some time
Hot damn, I feel I'm losing my mind
... I need to get out this killing routine
The path to freedom, what I'm seeing, what I say, what I mean


Still I wake every morning with these voices inside
It's telling me to keep on movin' and just don't wait and hide
There's no excuse and there's no reason (for) u to not give a damn
Your time is too short to just waste it on the things you don't want

When your day comes, it should be faced without the sigh of despair
You owe the satisfaction to yourself, the soul that you bear
... Face your life without the fear of regret
Cause when you're done they'll know you're gone but they will never forget


Chorus:
Hot damn, I feel I'm doing some time
Hot damn, I feel I'm losing my mind
... I need to get out this killing routine
The path to freedom, what I'm seeing, what I say, what I mean


These voices keep on talking like it never want me to stop
It doesn't listen, doesn't argue and it don't give a crap
It doesn't take any suggestions, it just pushes me on
It leads me somewhere I'm familiar but I've never been on

I realized then that the voices that I'm hearing so loud
Was always me trying to get out of this unhallowed ground
... Take control of what is dealt from now on
The road to hell is always paved with good intentions and all

Descent song pal. A few of the earlier lines can be slightly reworded I think to allow it to flow better but other then that great
Also love the chorus really catchy

Thank you for the review. I'm working on recording the acoustic version of this so I hope I get some feedback on that as well once uploaded.