I need help! This has nothing to do with lyrics, but it has to do w/spanish.

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  1. harris27 said:

    Question I need help! This has nothing to do with lyrics, but it has to do w/spanish.

    I need help!

    I have an assignment to right the wrong in the following spanish sentences. The professsor did give us a hint on how many errors were in each of the sentences. We have to write the sentence correctly and underline the errors or mistakes in the sentences.

    Yo les invito a mi amiogos. (3 errors) an accent mark was over the o.

    La fiesta fui en mi hermanas casa. (2 errors)

    Mi amigos y yo toquemos musica rock,salsa y hip-hop. (3 errors)

    Ofreci bebidas alcoholicas ni refrescos. (1 error)

    La gente bailaron a la musica y tuvieron un buen tiempo.(2 errors)

    Mi amigo Sarah bailo mucho mala.(4 errors)

    La fiesta fui buena.(1 error)

    A las 5 por la manana, el vecinos llamaron a la policia porque hay mucha ruido.(4 errors)

    La policia venio y tenimos que acabar la fiesta. (2 errors)

    No queri acabarlo y la policia me amenazo mi con detenerme.(3 errors)

    Entonces acabe la y mi amigos fueron a casa.(2 errors)

    Teni tanto diversion que decidi teni otra fiesta la proximo semana. (5 errors)

    After that we have to make a list of the different errors that we find and give an example. The list of different errors has to be done in enlish. For instance, if there was a subject verb agreement, accent marks, pronoun mistakes,etc.
     
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    Yo les invito a mi amiogos. (3 errors) an accent mark was over the o.

    YO INVITO A MIS AMIGOS.

    (YO LES INVITO)

    La fiesta fui en mi hermanas casa. (2 errors)

    LA FIESTA FUE EN CASA DE MI HERMANA.

    Mi amigos y yo toquemos musica rock,salsa y hip-hop. (3 errors)

    MIS AMIGOS Y YO TOCAMOS MUSICA ROCK, SALSA Y HIP-HOP.

    (I can only find 2... maybe you must say YO Y MIS AMIGOS...)

    Ofreci bebidas alcoholicas ni refrescos. (1 error)

    NO OFRECI BEBIDAS ALCOHOLICAS NI REFRESCOS.

    OFRECI BEBIDAS ALCOHOLICAS Y REFRESCOS.

    La gente bailaron a la musica y tuvieron un buen tiempo.(2 errors)

    This sentence is quite wrong...

    LA GENTE BAILO AL SON DE LA MUSICA (CON LA MUSICA) Y SE LO PASO BIEN (tuvieron un buen tiempo sounds as a literal translation from english).

    Mi amigo Sarah bailo mucho mala.(4 errors)

    MI AMMIGA SARAH BAILO MUY MAL

    La fiesta fui buena.(1 error)

    LA FIESTA FUE BUENA

    (Also weird... la fiesta estuvo bien)

    A las 5 por la manana, el vecinos llamaron a la policia porque hay mucha ruido.(4 errors)

    A LAS CINCO DE LA MAÑANA, LOS VECINOS LLAMRON A LA POLICIA PORQUE HABIA MUCHO RUIDO.

    La policia venio y tenimos que acabar la fiesta. (2 errors)

    LA POLICIA VINO Y TUVIMOS QUE ACABAR LA FIESTA.

    No queri acabarlo y la policia me amenazo mi con detenerme.(3 errors)

    NO QUERIA ACABARL Y LA POLICIA ME AMENAZO CON DETENERME.

    Entonces acabe la y mi amigos fueron a casa.(2 errors)

    ENTONCES LA ACABE Y MIS AMIGOS SE FUERON A CASA.

    Teni tanto diversion que decidi teni otra fiesta la proximo semana. (5 errors)

    TUVE TANTA DIVERSION QUE DECIDI TENER OTRA FIESTA LA PROXIMA SEMANA .
    :-) now you do the rest... you have to learn after all.
     
  3. harris27 said:

    Talking Thank you so much for your help!

    I already corrected the sentences before I asked for help. I was making sure my corrections were right. I did good except for one sentence. Again, thank you so much. I'll be asking for your help soon! (smile)

    harris27
     
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    :-)

    ok, you are wellcome. Anyhow, I missed some letters due to my fast writing... :-) hope you could find them. Anyhow, those were my mistakes:

    AMMIGA -> AMIGA
    LLAMRON -> LLAMARON
    ACABARL -> ACABARLA

    Sorry, i will try to write more carefully next tiem. And also will write with accents ;-)