Reset Myself

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  1. yourlifestorywales said:

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    You can find a way to make this better
    Find a way to bring us home
    You could open up my heartfelt letter
    Or spend this season all alone
    Perhaps it’s something I can’t change
    Perhaps it’s something no-one can
    I wish it could have finished
    The way that it began

    Just looking for a fresh start
    A way to empty a heart full of regret
    I wish I could reset myself
    Cause this is the year I want to forget

    I miss the times we shared together
    Miss the times you smiled
    Miss the times spent in the heather
    Where we used to go and hide
    Hide from all the problems
    Hide from all the hurt
    And never did we care
    About the grass stains and the dirt

    Just looking for a fresh start
    A way to empty a heart full of regret
    I wish I could reset myself
    Cause this is the year I want to forget

    I’m letting go slowly
    It’s so hard to forget
    But maybe, just maybe
    You’ll depart my life today
    Help me forget the things that bring me back to you
    Cause all they do is bring more hurt

    © Copyright 2007 Sam Evans


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    SpudMunky said:

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    Very good! I like those lyrics! I'm not sure whether you'd want to repeat what appears to be the chorus again at the end, I'm unsure but otherwise I think that those lyrics are brilliant they feel as though you have gone through it and as the reader/listener, I think it evokes feelings that almost make you feel as though you are going through it as well!
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  3. Image said:

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    I like it. You have good rythm, and it all ties together.
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