Last Seconds Missing

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  1. Jacobdatz said:

    Default Last Seconds Missing

    But what’s every breath without you,
    And one more second ill push through

    But it won’t be the same
    No wont be the same

    You’ve taken a part of me that I can’t replace,
    And I can’t forget the look on your face
    As you ended this
    As you ended this

    I watch the tree we used to sit by
    Stare at the stars way up in the sky

    Oh but it’s not the same
    It’ll never be the same

    You’ve taken a part of me that I can’t replace,
    And I can’t forget the look on your face
    As you ended this (ooh)
    As you ended this (whoa ooh)

    What did u expect?
    How am I meant to forget?
    Every detail
    Every moment
    Every time you made my heart thump

    You’ve broken me
    Taken me from heaven to hell
    Broken me,
    There’s nothing I can be
    Because

    You’ve taken a part of me that I can’t replace,
    And I can’t forget the look on your face
    As you ended this
    As you ended this (whoa)
    As you ended thissss dream
     
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    SpudMunky said:

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    These lyrics could be really good however I'm unsure about your opening line, it just doesn't seem like a way of opening a song, it's too random, however I feel the rest of your lyrics are written well. I would re-arrange it to be:

    I watch the tree we used to sit by
    Stare at the stars way up in the sky

    Oh but it’s not the same
    It’ll never be the same

    You’ve taken a part of me that I can’t replace,
    And I can’t forget the look on your face
    As you ended this
    As you ended this

    But what’s every breath without you,
    And one more second I'll push through

    But it won’t be the same
    No wont be the same

    You’ve taken a part of me that I can’t replace,
    And I can’t forget the look on your face
    As you ended this (ooh)
    As you ended this (whoa ooh)

    What did u expect?
    How am I meant to forget?
    Every detail
    Every moment
    Every time you made my heart thump

    You’ve broken me
    Taken me from heaven to hell
    Broken me,
    There’s nothing I can be
    Because

    You’ve taken a part of me that I can’t replace,
    And I can’t forget the look on your face
    As you ended this
    As you ended this (whoa)
    As you ended thissss dream

    I hope this has helped!
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