My first effort at writing lyrics

Ive never tried to write song lyrics before, but recently have had alot of crap happen that has annoyed me and thought i could get rid of my anger by writing a song about it.

Just want to know are they complete crap?? lol

Not Even Her Boyfriend
Verse 1
She comes in from a crazy night out, starts searchin through her phone,
Lookin for some meaningless fun, so she doesn’t feel alone,
She knows just how to wind you up, asks if you want to play a game,
You know she has a boyfriend, but you don’t care or know his name.

Chours
Your not even her boyfriend, just some fun on the side,
When your other brain starts working again theres a thought you just cant hide,
Is she nothing more, than a blatant *****, or is she still not over you?
You’ve gotta feel for whats his name, oh if only he knew.

Verse 2
She texts you to come and pick her up at 12 from the local bar,
She wants you to take her a spin then sit and talk in your car,
It didn’t take long for the chat to go wrong, her attention was drawn down south,
Chat my ***, she’s got no class, as she tells you to blow in her mouth.
Repeat chorus.

Verse 3
And so suddenly, you find yourself happy, with the girl of your dreams,
Little do you know shes about to show, just what hurtin really means,
She goes back to her place, with whats his face, while your blissfully unaware
Looks like your on the receiving end now, I guess whats fair is fair.

End chorus
He wasn’t even her boyfriend, he was just some way to pass the time,
How angry can you feel at him, when you were guilty of the same crime?
You played the game and so it came full circle back to you,
You just hope to hell, that time will tell, and the game will break her too.

They're definatly not complete crap, I like them a lot.

Reminds me of Avril Lavignes stuff - but harder and more meaningful. I can hear a tune building in my mind as I read. Excellent work.

Justin

I like them, So real and true. Keep writing!