Brothers True

This is probably just about final now.
Thanks to all you guys who commented in it.

Brothers True ― Justin Cayce

You can prise my gun out-of my cold, dead hand
Out-of my cold, dead hand, out-of my cold, dead hand
You can prise my gun out-of my cold, dead hand
Out-of my cold, dead hand -you can prise my gun

Now Freddie played the guitar and he often sang for John
And Johnnie he would listen till the evening had grown long
Cause Johnnie love to hear his brother sing of being free
And Johnnie dreamed 'bout how he'd fight for liberty

You can prise my gun out-of my cold, dead hand
Out-of my cold, dead hand, out-of my cold, dead hand
You can prise my gun out-of my cold, dead hand
Out-of my cold, dead hand -you can prise my gun

Now Freddie played and sang his song, and often played the fool
But brother John was serious - considering life cruel
While Freddie, sang of freedom - with words which were inspired
Big John acquired the tools the task required

You can prise my gun out-of my cold, dead hand
Out-of my cold, dead hand, out-of my cold, dead hand
You can prise my gun out-of my cold, dead hand
Out-of my cold, dead hand -you can prise my gun

And y'already know why Freddie’s songs are full of tears
Cause in a country fit for heroes -Johnnie ain’t around to hear
He paid the price for Freddie to know freedom isn’t free
And Fred remembers John each day - by being all that he can be

And you can… Prise my gun…

Yes, you can… prise my gun…
©Justin Cayce 2009

©Justin Cayce 2009

I really like this song. It paints a great imagine in my head, especially the first verse. bravo.


Edit: Just saw your question, and no I don't see it being offensive at all.

really nice lyrics, it creates a whole own universe of images, really good.
I don't see it as anything offensive, in my opinion nothing is offensive, some people just make a big deal out of it, others see it as freedom.
this sounds like freedom to me
keep it up