help me write a chorus?? please

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  1. sdbbMIXTAPE-KING said:

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    ok so im working on this song and its called THIS IS MY STORY and im totally stuck on the chorus
    this is what i got so far


    v1
    let me tell you a lil bout me
    been a juggalo since that earthquake in kobe
    95 was the year of my birth
    gotta passion for rappin and swingin my hatchet like i was born with a curse to spit this versue
    and i like to be explicit
    and ima get it quick
    age 10-i became a lyricist write this wicked ****
    hopen yalls listenin and feelin it
    age 11- met the girl of my dreams
    not really,thats just they way it seemed
    age 12-the devil came through and my soul was sold
    aint got no feelins cuz my f**kin heart is cold
    13-i started earnin my strypes
    tokin the pipe
    gettin in fights just to survive
    tryin to live this f**ked up life
    im tired of flyin high and doin everything right so ima just glide
    now im on the decks of hell with satan
    anticipatin,waitin-to get up out this ***** and steale the spotlight
    like a star i aint ever gonna lose my shine


    i need the chorus to say somethin about THIS IS MY STORY
  2. g498h's Avatar

    g498h said:

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    i got nothing because i dont write for rap...

    but...MMFWCL...
  3. FlamE's Avatar

    FlamE said:

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    hmm .. i`m not really talented at rap but i can give you a suggestion

    How this is gonna end there's no way I could know
    But till I`m alive I`m gonna stick to my flow
    Using the mic as a weapon , now it's time for some glory
    So get your ***** outta here , cause this is my story

    I hope I helped you a bit xD
    -= FlamE =-