Sometimes I wonder (short drop)

yoyo lyrical ****...just kidding.

Sometimes I wonder why I even attempt this rap sh!t./
Am I fake like plastic? Will people look past it? /
Or maybe the game be just a little too drastic,/
focused on their items rather than the rhymin'/
I try to perfect my timing but there's hills that i'm climbin'./
wondering if I am still what i've been eying. /
They say if you're not livin' then you're busy dying./
But all the time i'm spittin' with these rhythms that i'm vibing/

Some feedback would be cool. I wrote it to the "Heard "em Say" instrumental by Kanye.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=TPzvnDCs-2U

I digg these lyrics, simple but...nice

I kind of wrote this while tired and i'll admit it's really forced. Had coffee and stayed up writing.