16 bars I wrote

Wrote it to this instrumental-http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NPiLHfevfzQ

I construct a fresh rhyme every time I get time./
Make my brain create reactions like a f#ckin' enzyme./
Beats playing in the back, heats blazing on the track./
Wrote this dope sh#t, addictive prone like crack./
At first rap was just a gamble, but I still drop bars./
Now i'm killin' it like Rambo, taking out cop cars./
Type it on my ipod, snipin' just like Cod./
Hopefully you might nod, or say, "oh my god"./
But if not it's okay, I don't care anyways./
I'm doin' this for fun son, not tryin' to amaze./
Just loosely sittin' and kickin' it like Bruce Lee's shittin it./
Spittin writtens leaving victims wishin' I had gone fishin'./
but on a mission that causes a vision to go so aggressive./
got flow like progressive which is oh so impressive./
you wanna know the method, but all I do is write sh#t./
Floatin' in some rhyme spit, smokin' up a nice spliff./

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