I'm the best lyrical write on this site; superb sperical hype applied in full cycle.
The bird in flight gets sniped through both vitals..
My heightened type typed flow gets so 'rifled'.
I stifle those who appose their own idols.
I'm aesopic on some Greek fable note chris..
Teach; flood knowledge on some breached naval boat s**t.
A punch sums college then leaves painful moments with.
And you think of that^ as filler or random..
It's nature but I'm throwing things off kilter like i pillaged her mansion.
The thought process in me is handsome..
I process raw thoughts with an on-slot of hot drops with scansions.
It's almost entrancing but I fight a brute.
it's hard to like rhymes in-spite of you. (mine, of you)
_bu Finds it crude so hides the truth..
I've got smooth mood and a cushion on things; lighted booth
26 minutes and many sick linnets learned forged this drop.
And Im never random and never finished, immortal hip hop.
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I can't believe I'm witnessing this little b*tch's hissy fits
Originally Posted by smoothtung
over-reacting to a diss like he's a militant islamist
you should be gettin 50 whips for frontin like your killing it,
when truth is Chris just doesn't respect you as a lyricist
I'll call you 'bud' cuz your career's nipped in this
it's killing him, the fact that when he's gone.. no one's missing him
so while modestly attrbuting 'greatness' to his filler sh*t
the truth is he can barely throw together decent limmericksLast edited by Venomonology; 07-16-2012 at 12:22 PM.
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You, man..
wrote me like a true fan.
Non-stop on some new plans, a new land and new fam.
I didn't give a f*** but acted like I did enough..
Your being straight up so I'll leave this thing tilted 'bruv'.
I know you figure your tough but it's a crude scam.
I've walked all over you; distance runs; shoe brands.
You've not hot effect, now you've lost respect. Final.
You cover up good; off-set defected vinyl.
I've been on here forever, spilling my insides..
I've seen better centered suffer killings dying in-stride.
But it's not a game to me, a contest nor piss match.
I've wrote as it came to me, you two recruit dispatch.
Chris and his new protégée . Have fun with it..
..i wish I had more to say but dunce did it.
..I'm just not respected as a lyricist.
Phh f**k it, my calling for text is near/amidst; wont veer or slip
You're mistaken and mis-taken you aren't good.
You front like a car hood and paste from rap is alive.
So if your confidence is large rook you're scrapping pride.
So if your confidence is large rook I'm asking why..
Let's polish the subject for a crisp clearer status.
Dont talk to me about chris, is he superior? does it matter?
He's a good rapper, well a good lyricist.
But if you'd rather greener pastures you'd, SIHT rorrimLast edited by smoothtung; 07-17-2012 at 11:20 PM.
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Dear john, I'm leaving its not going to work. Im gone you're cheating, the thoughts will always lurk. Am I wrong, or this SaBU and he's telling smooth he's a jerk? Must be a tease and she's peeved cuz he's being pleased by two and three newbies who be like U Bs, on two knees each. Mouth piece breached. And smooth leaves proof on the sheets. We do on the streets put boots to knees for putting moves on a G. Be astute as I teach you'll hear truth in my speech. SaBU reach smooths peak? Dude please! Better chance finding groupies-at a nude beach- on a jet ski that can't be moved sb's got the sea doo's-key's glued-with two peas-to the- inside his blue briefs under his see thru-ski suit- full of dookie. U do see- that's a sea dont that won't ski. Please don't grieve your wanting Gs in Greek font in front of me. Literally- my abilities - could kill a beef. But hostilities and versatility got me killing to beats. Putting steel thru your teeth, reavealing you're weak, as u collect your grill like spilled pills at Your feet. What's beef? A love that never lasted, and I've fukn had it. The Mack's back at it, relapsed with mad static, cuz the last $hit u crafted was by the hand of a faggit. Or one sad @$$ bit(h. Get fukn past it, its passed sass and lacks class. Put smooth on blast with some trailer trash fit, so get attacked quick with graffic tactics and fast wit. This unwrapped gift I rapped to smash it. Never out lasted, I'm long winded. But, when did u write the extended story that never ended? Were u suspended in time? Has it mended your mind? I cringed with each line, each sentence u mentioned a crime. 4s vent when there mans dickin a dime. My intent is to offend this pretentious transgender pretender.. surrender your anal retentions and resent this.. your delivered rants resemble excrement. Similar to the English and the french, that sh|t didn't lack stench. Its intensely repugnent.. U wipe with limp wrist? Cuz u type with a simps lisp. Like the fag on the Simpsons and befriend more men than Schindler's list, gas'em then dip then talk half @$$ sh|t unhappy with friendship want more, prefer to have your friends sh|t. I can tell of hell, I've been. And will again to collect the devils rent. I've smelled the scent of singed skin ever since the first time I ever went, I'm content hanging with imps. You're not heaven sent, you're irrelevant and full of embellishments .. I'm hell bent on telling it. My demons dwell within and tales of them keep melting pens.u buy boys sold to men in sets of twins, then shackle them in cellars til they're unwell and thin with a yellow tint cuz u can't get fellows of Asian decent rembering what happened when last you did. Fight with skeletons to prevent them from yelling it. I can't fake faith so I prey on those who pray to be saved by grace, but stay enslaved by doorways to hide their craves. I don't insinuate I state. U behave in ways that portray your gay. More foreplay to make your day.. I mastuerbate as I articulate art I create. Hard di(k up late, ejaculate all on your page right to your face.. I am tasteless but u taste it.. racey but not the raciest.. just not afraid to display rage youre faced with on a day to day basis. While u run away at a fast rate but stay to take bits of my crazy creativeness and replace script with cake mix to make it seem racist where no hate is.. nail me naked to crossed braces, but I embrace this stockade of hatred for the greatest on the lateshift.. .. I'm a sadist, its savored .. retraced paces place u in makeshift graves safely hidden by foggy hazes.. outrageous.! Battle with no stages, fugazis with no faces. Blasts with no gauges texts that give chases.. puzzle like mazes, confuse like dazes.. contagious. Infectious scripture.. let this picture get your gag reflex flexible..spit sick sh|t like drip di(k, rip this trick bit(h off his pedestal. My marks indelible, u r not credible. Incredible the depths hell go. Respectable to let it go , unacceptable to continue being a spectacle with regrettable letters directed towards the impecuble, untestable.. educactional wordplay. Immeasurable swordplay.. smoothtung stepped in the door and got SaBU sprung like you'd expect from a wh0re. Shadow your steps smooth crept as u slept and u bled out from the neck.he had me check u were dead before we left to get your kin next. robbn da hood as mack's following grew some. Gruesome, loose guns, lude puns, and bruised lungs.. I never knew fun til I refused nuns abuse and abused one with smoothtung... were unstable, no labels or Stale Better Urself fables.. just turned tables on the unable.. replaceable .. impregnate a ho by immaculate deception .. I haunt with no discretion, taunt with my confessions .. flaunt poetic possession .. give historical lessons .. restore, refreshen .. u lay in your bed sexting, undressing. Like stan, pad on the night stand where u write men when the lights dim for excitement. For u "excite" meant, excite men..u fight pens, I write sins. You're frightened by who might grin.. I'm pist but give guidance, u rhyme piss and watch guys dance.. I encite riots when I'm high pitched, but silence .. enjoy the violence in quiet as I recite this tight dis.. whys it everytime I pull out my di(k u ride it? Wanna like it but fight it, love it but hide it..I like it ruff so bite bit(h! I won't describe it like I did that white chick.. cut off her right t|t and deep fried it to a light crisp sliced thick .. she was on a diet but denied it to try it.now she rocks bras lopped sided.. lies get disguises when the sky's lit.. cries get eyes hit.. my nice spit drowns your dry sh|t.. need new tiles after my viewed files became SaBUs guide. U been watching me for a huge while.. choose wild or do mild... I'm too vile but my crude styles produce smiles like Jews piled for a few miles..an abused child grew while no help came, but who'd dial? Show @$$ like when skirts lift.. got mourning wood when smooth killed your verses and reversed it, molested the priest that provided your service. But I'm not gay man just lame slaying. Ask Satan I'm patient but I can't wait for your next wake to say amen.... I'm not playing play in the play pen u were raped in as an infant and be raped again. Uve aged my man but your only sanctum seems plain to me, rectum invasion. Opt for evasion and I'm taken a limb replacing it with a slaves limp.. u scream robb Mack. As you hop back to cop crack and go off track in hopes of getting to cough for a cop with his maglight up your @$$ crack
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hey, wait.. maybe I gave the wrong impression.. Originally Posted by Venomonology
I said that Venom's second best here, I forgot to mention,
when I give you props.. it's to piss Smooth' off.
just bear that in mind when I 'like' scripts you drop.
Venomonology.. you backed down from battle defeated and you silently hid..
liking my scripts whilst biding time for a mighty revival to finally win.
I humiliated Smooth', considered maybe you'd attempt to avenge your friend and stridently diss.
like the strike'd be big, insightful and sick, replying with wit and my pride'd be hit.
nah.. you limped in thinking you're more deadly now, doubtless.
you're kicking my victim since he's already down. coward.
you're best set against weak people who seem beaten.
you really think kicking his corpse made you seem lethal?
you telling him that I don't respect him just seems feeble.
compared to your cheap schemes the thief seems regal.
like I don't respect his lyrics or yours but you'll never be equal..
if I've not got any respect for his lyrical wisdom or syllable systems,
I disrespect the very essence of all that you represent with your pitiful fiction.
Venomonology.. I assess texts as a test in philosophy, ethics and honesty.
you're desperate to impress but your weak attempts seem terribly wrong to me.
ey, wait.. you'd better send your friend an apology.
you're in a crew with Smooth' but you're trecherous constantly.
you hid then chipped in to hit him with timid little disses after I harmed the guy.
targetwise.. there's that biting liar and this cowardly traitor so I can't decide.
I broke both at once though.. Venom an' Smoothtung.
Tung rots with toxins as Venom's all used up,
both loathe each other like the rest of the room does.
Venom and Smoothtung were together as crew once,
the 'craftsmen' or something, remember it guys?
just a whole load of lines resembling mine with less of the shine.
I wouldn't contribute directly but was in the cyphers..
Smooth and Venom competed for my attention, bitter rivals.
ok I get that you respect my lines, it's embarrassing,
you know that I like your style, I established it.
Smooth.. quit, stop battling or put a lot more practise in.
Venom.. quit using my name to attack him with.
you said the term 'fool' should never appear in a rap verse, a bad word.
you're a fool and should never appear in a rap verse, that's worse.Last edited by _SBU; 07-17-2012 at 04:32 PM.
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I pity the 'fool' like I'm Mr T.
have you runnin' back home pretendin' you miss the tea.
it's bittersweet. it's no mystery.
you're overly parred off like you missed the tee.
uh. furthermore..
my every word's worth a verse of yours.
Venom made a version of Lennon's 'Imagine'
see the Beat'll drop; weapons of Chapman's.
from peaceful 'cult' to a replica magnum..
if you respect Lennon it's less than apparent.
seems he's killin it.. tragic.
I'm killin him since he's killin that magic.
imagine all the people.. digging deep into new music,
they'll never make the same mistakes once they've heard you do it.
imagine all the people turning your trashy track off,
then they frolic in fields after smashing the laptops.
I'm not good enough to write lines for lennon's track, I accept the fact.
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I'm not impressed with this like he is.. Originally Posted by _SBU
Mustn't speak of genius..
You're impression driven. Lennon listed that as a weakness.
But on the real its cool to show our confidence..
but feel me, in this field is it cool to grope for dominance?
Of a spot that's not so prominent?
You didn't 'harm' me.
You loose props.
I'm hardy but I hardly need to be to when '_U' drop(s).
No one here needs or wants your attention.
You didn't teach my style you bought in to the progression.
I love some things you say on different plays, I've delivered praise.
(So you know I picture your name in a fitter phrase..)
Though all the well chris your zealous and 'un-selfish' as hell dawg..
Everything's about "them" when you're just as well flawed.
I threw in 'zealous' ^ note it. cuz you're 'devoted' so you knew my insults heartfelt.
You're good man, dope s**t but the best? that's a hard sellLast edited by smoothtung; 07-18-2012 at 09:43 AM.
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bite your style? err.. no, why'd I? Originally Posted by _SBU
truth is my skill here's left you wide eyed
skills refined over time like fine wine
& dude it's not you that they've been defined by
I've risen through the ranks fast - check the timeline
now you're hot under collar cuz your top spot's bye bye
& let's set the lies right: unlike Smooth, you I don't emulate
when A.T.L. went down, all rappers here had to emigrate
I was already texting over on R.I.A.
so I offered it up for you guys to come investigate
one by one you came, but no one that did ever stayed
cuz the style of write was different, I had to educate
I set up The Craftsmen with Smooth on there to demonstrate
how easy it is to adapt; & then to elevate
you battled once or twice, but never left the edges scraped
I beat you easy cuz those guys disliked your clever plays
you disappeared into unsocial mental fetid caves
cuz you couldn't accept the fact you aren't the best on every stage
so you ran back here, talked to Tania, offered extra bait
if people misbehave now it's on you to rat & tell her names
all to get this site back up cuz you claim it's a better place
but truth is here's the only place you've ever been respected, mate
well, that ends now Chris; I'm fired up to denigrate
I'll set ablaze your heaven's shape, & all that's there I'll extirpate
I never competed with Tung for your attention
I was never your apprentice and I never wanted mentions
I asked for advice now and then, but you avoided questions
no explanation given.. so I assumed the boy felt threatened
now my lines shine with a light like they're dropped from heaven
but I don't believe in God, so I say they're phosphorescent
while Chris is falling helpless, trying to form connections
I'll have him backing up like the horse on the Porsche emblem
& you call me treacherous? that little verse was effortless
I just got peeved at the endurance of his tendernessLast edited by Venomonology; 07-18-2012 at 11:00 AM.
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Ven..
Stop this nonsense, you're two faced.
Dishonestly due praise for comments that you've made.
Attempted conquest of a new place soon changed you.
You've processed truths, made dues, but the net had your name duped.
Then a second face grew..
And I reckon hate bloomed.
Get caught in my netting. I've 'extra bait' too.
Chris says my name, then it's hook line and sinker.
Chris says my name then ven chimes in quicker.
You prove fast to-do smash at the hatch of morality.
Bust open the screw cap and not hold back the audacity.
You hassle me but you're digging 'Holes' like zigzag..
In this tale venom slithering near toes will be hit/smashed.
'Lizard' lips, slither slick. the 'fitter' kid is fake and 'tung tied'.
My slicker whit has you reminiscing of when I had bacon once fried.
This battle is a mess and venom is not needed.
Rather death but when tallying the dead you were caught breathing.
Not pleasing.
Stop teasing. It hurts you..
It'd be cool if you drop soon but teach can't get caught abusing curfew.Last edited by smoothtung; 07-19-2012 at 09:18 PM.
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If I was a bear I'd sh*t in da woods and wipe my @$$ with a rabbit... I'm not. I'm one hi individual , ride with kriminals, so I grab up this bowl and I pack it. Then I sign in, for rhymin slapstick. If I was a shark I'd sh*t in the sea and wipe my @$$ with a fish... I'm not. I'm robbmack and I come back cuz I love this sh*t. Could be a waiter, I can dish out a dis.. or even a bus boy cuz I can take your dish with thanks as u dis.. fuk this my hi's low, can't rhyme slow and typically I reply quotes.. tonight though seems my foes are posting BIOS.. is it my go? In time bro, first hydro..........aw sh*t... now I'm slow and can't remind flows ........ huh?......oh right I know, my vitals..I write those each time I post.. yall know me better than my h0e..I started on this site to hide from psycho.. and I found it on accident, I act out with a pen. One of my poems was so strong I had to make sure it didn't belong to a song.. instantly impressed with the thread and was set to invest time better spent in bed.. to have my words read by poets I respect. Then expect disrespect and checks on my rep... bet.. I'm a sick dogg seeing my vet.. I'm sick dogg, double Bs been being a vet. I've been escaping on paper since I was a fourth grader.. that's probably longer ago than any of y'all are old... with that said, please hold............ aw, where was I?.......... let me see, oh!.. to see flows like these, whoa! This IS true rap, not that new crap.. no twenty inch rims, h0es, plenty Benjamin's..just shainnanigans, with fans and friends.. no enemies just not friends to me.. maybe from over seas, maybe just down the street.. ones in big D I credit him for helping me.. I readily admit, my poetry is as much therapy as inhaling weed... never had a cause to battle, never cared for the hassle. But I am an @$$hole ill call a fat h0e fatso .. I adapted though evolution came natural, and my mad flows bring mad flows.. I know the truth hurts, but... some get butt hurt... like there sore from a saddle. I would have never said "saddle" but it was used on me in a battle .. I was baffled. I quiet roars like a baffle.. but there's more in my satchel, I haven't covered it all like a strippers tassles.. I've been up sh*t creek, and I had a paddle. But there was a jackel in my raft, as we hit crap rapids. He fell in, when he inhaled in,... well u know, he drowned in feces.. I clowned sb. Cuz he's a well rounded beast who camps in trees, reference to C.O.D. where death is the cost of delivery.. the smoothest G here is revered here as the truest grit by those far and near.. been reading ven too.. intend to put a dot on his head like a Hindu .. looking into sending a few offending and rude compliments fool.. its my dominant tool .. expanding like a bomb, BOOM!! And the wind blew my plume to lend u a new doom
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if you're "a bus boy" you should show proper conduct.
if you're "a waiter" and "grab up this bowl" ..bring some hot stuff.
if you're sharp, at least leave your lines chopped up.
"if you were a shark".. you'd have got sunk. pond scum.
"if you were a bear" ..bare flesh and a soft rug.
ey, wait.. robb bruv, I'm not done..
"if you were a bear" I'd eat meat, defecate and wipe off on mangy pelt.
if robb's a "sick dog" I'm not offering meds 'til he behaves himself.
if robb mack were anything else but himself it would replace him well.
if robb was hot ..I'd take a flame in hell and make it melt.
if he were me he'd be on track.
if I were robb mack I would not rap.
..he barely does anyway ..part time writer.
take the next step down and pass by silent.
even when he raps he lacks presence in cyphers.
rarely says anything. never says anything vital..
except when he said "vital" but that's just chat, doesn't count.
all his words are hollow and I'm breaking down the structures now.
robb "rides with kriminals", not quite 'criminals'. litterbugs:
robb mack drops 'raps.. trash. I'll make him pick 'em up.
straight up, honest.. I'm better than robb is.
just saying that to seem humble and modest.
I'm a rapper with the craft, capturing the art,
never ever set to be a rapper in the charts.
ay, wait.. you said I'm "a jackel in a raft"??
that was so strange it had to bring a laugh.
like hyenas in arenas. nah, you're cattle in a ranch.
you all seem weak as sheep in massive abatoirs.
.."Double Bs been being vet"?
ruptured spleen from weak attempts.
I've been being a beast, I'd eat a vet.
his raps are like parasites that vets end, he's been a pest.
I'm more into 'double D's, "Double B"s never even seen a breast.
I'd get 'double A's, you'd even flunk an easy test, seeming stretched;
you'd even lose to Smooth and now you're facing me instead.
the 'vigorous flip' would even leave "Benjamin" Button seeming pressed.
your entire freestyle scheme's been oppressed. please accept,
you've seen the best and dreams were wrecked, I cut you and you bleed respect,
beat you down hard and diss with disregard as you weep respect.
I was gonna advise you to divide lines right.. just delete the text.Last edited by _SBU; 07-19-2012 at 04:37 PM.
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YOU would lose to me.
You'd ooze deceit.
I'd make you lose sleep thinking smooth's due to compete.
You'd leave with wounds of defeat.
Askew and bruised to the feet.
I'm not peeved just repeating what you used with V...
Try to kick it how i kick it, you'd need a cane intact.
You'd be leaving limping like you've rickets, insane as that..
Point is, you're just brewing shame by the masses.
Like you've been saying Chris; .."quit using my name to attack with"..Last edited by smoothtung; 07-19-2012 at 06:16 PM.
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Look
I know you think you're clever
I drop you from the top with a pull of the lever
Heater in the summer we can heat it up whenever
You can make it to my level sometime like never
Measure the difference, all a' my *****es
Flyer than yours, mind ya damn business
I am not finished, take a ****in seat down
****in lil hood rat look I run the whole town
King of ya block, king of the glock
****in lil sissy you just king of the ****
Cream of the crop, your lyrics minced meat
You think you're the **** but you stink of defeat
Your girlfriend'll leave ya soon as she meets me
You a' waste of my time, and my time ain't free
All my time is precious like the money owes me
Your girlfriend look like Precious set that whale free
I put my money where my mouth is you only pay fees
So bow to the greatest mother****er indeed -
Goin' from urban to pop and back to hip hop
Show aint over till I'm done and say stop
No more pill poppin on my watch over the top
Let em loose blazin bullets till the clip drop
Quick as a snake but the bite is venom-less
Comin to comparison when average your a litle less
You a quickill but the kill is painless
Shuttin you down' runnin' outcha business
Measure the difference and you come up below the bars
Momma wasn't talkin to you she said shoot for the stars
This is a quickill but every hit will be felt
Tryna come back to the game that I done built. -
You wanna rap in everyday conversation. You wanna rap? Dont quit your everyday occupation.. Go stack more boxes in the back of the warehouse, tryin to mack ROBBs got your under wear doused. Youre foul, you louse, go pout. You know MACKs been ROBBn your ego, me and lil b laff at it where ever we go. You've been writing "ROBB" "MACK" like we're three amigos.. Scratch that rap, clean your nee-dle.. You're pressed like vinyls, u play around. u need a blanket like linus to stay around.. U put faith in inanimate objects, u belittle your friends cuz u think you're gods gift. So your fans jet and each that left, ROBBMACK gets cuz they get ROBBMACK... Champagne for my real friends real pain for the ones thats shammy. if we ever meet and u shake my hand be nervous if its clammy.. Your mixed up _SBU rap is -sub par and thats why u cant stand me... I got grammys for sale tryin to raise bail to bond sub outta hell. Just hosted a séance and with no fail we spoke to him, hes not doin well.. Hes charged with poppin shots at Smooth, he fell short they were blanks. Now hes in hell courts holding tank. A cell of sorts across from the barbed tail store, next door to skelators. He's running round, bitter, sour. Soft as a flower in his He-Man underoos, & he's a howler. Every hour on the hour he stops running, looks up at the gaurds tower and screams out, "I HAVE THE POWER!" Lil coward, I roll up and he cowers.. so I killed him again for the necro sport. I teleport back and forth to hack at this hack's corpse. A finger here,.. there an ear, .. where's his head? ... aw Satan, u qu€€r! Stop gettin sub head from sub, he's dead. Jokes aside, u say my name as though its imbedded in your brain. In bed do u do the same? Or instead do u scream? In your last rap u said "ROBB" "MACK" as though we are one person, as though u get only one version. Are u certain? Draw the curtain and see there's more than one B for a reason, two names to split pain between them. Cypher? U can't see what u've never seen unless u close your eyes. U can't see anything becuz you're blinded by lies. Your cyphers to tight, noone hears your cries.. ALARMS!! SIRENS!! BOMBS!! what the fuk is going on? Flash back I'm trapped back in Vietnam.. but wait you were right I'm no vet of any governments war. I'm a vet becuz I came up after being assisted by the government, poor.. see, I didn't make it to college. No BAs no PHDs to battle this scholar who learned how to write at a desk.. I learned how to write cheating death..u are the best, ask your self.. but so am I, just ask me I won't deny..we all are if u weren't I wouldn't have brought plex and called next. The half mex from ATX. But since you are the best, try to reply to a wreck.. not on a script where I offer respect..u act like I didn't rape u 8 posts ago..u ducked low, so now they know you're a h0e. FUK RESPECT!! You haven't earned it yet, I couldn't give a fuk less when u got on this site. Just cuz u can write doesn't mean u can write..find a sit-com and sit calm quit this con.. were all talkn $hit but u really $hit when u talk.. limp wrist when u walk.. bend at the hips to take c0ck, even cough so your friend can get off....
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if 'Two Face', I'm D.C.'s villain enlisting the world's youth Originally Posted by smoothtung
whereas you're such a 'Joker' I'd have to 'dress as Batman' to murk you
you're claim of being better is something that doesn't concern truth
so if you're gonna call me dishonest, we all know that's a dirt move
your hypocracy's got you a fan though .. that's the strategy the church proved
ironic you used to 'rob Macs' to get by ... now RobbMack's riding your d!ck like girls do -
This is week.
I thought you'd reply with energy and impulse.
Bequeath your conceded seat to defy every insult.
This took a turn for least and i find it ven's fault..
fiction? I'll leave this victim in heaps go to leave then leap him like men's vault.
Ven dawg,
I've been in different stuff but, prison poised me dry.
to smoke weed.
You're an invalid bruv.
Ignorant choice of lines = OD.Last edited by smoothtung; 07-25-2012 at 03:29 PM.
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"if Two Face", I'm hardly 'Dent'ed.. consider this lyricist's Bane, Originally Posted by Venomonology
still it's like you hide behind a dark mask, limiting pain.
you're always caught slipping yet forever set to climb.
since new music never dies.. Heath ledger'lines?
if V's into comic books.. V for Vendetta.
or.. best on the 'web' so more lethal than 'Venom'
you tend to only ever reference insignificant things like the new movies.
Venom sunk, like his is the tung that Smooth spoonfeeds. -
Originally Posted by Venomonology
ey, wait..
Venommonotony..
your flow shines like tear drops from blind eyes.
you're abhored, I'm appalled if I'm "wide-eyed",
why'die? stop the crap and watch your back; hindsight.
Venomous prey, so if I ate,'e won. like nine 'nines.
I mean.. it seems he needs to be seen as a clever nerd,
just 'to'point'three'recurring' themes out like seven thirds.
..first: you seem to treat deep speech as an easy maths test;
with rigidly formulaic focus that lacks bredth of even Mack's text.
..next: your raps lack any feeling or substance,
when I 'sed"ate" you were suddenly much numb'er.
..third: you should've gladly accepted second place and celebrated it,
not merely resembled potential and lost the spot instead of taking it.
..
come forth out of your quarters but check what Ven'did..
he dropped hollow 'raps instead of hard bars, not sellin'.
since with his scripts it's always: "Chris this.." and "Chris that..",
Chris says.. admit that or skip back to catch the facts and then quit rap.
Chris thinks.. Venom, you'll never really make it.
Chris couldnt give a s*** what 'Venom's real name is.
even though you seem to keep speaking my name with 'high regards'..
some here get defensive, misinterpret real lyrical intent then 'hire guards':
..
like when Smooth' was bruised, called Ven' in to defend him,
then Ven' killed his last chance along with their friendship.
'dawg'.. petty, pathetically dependant and sensing rejection.
you get mad but should just be glad of getting a mention,
should be alone in shame instead of intending on getting attention,
Smoothtung; an envious felon I knew once; forgettable presence,
frequently sitting in fetal position, too youthful due to mental regression.
truth, yo.. Smooth's own angles aint deflecting the pressure,
Venom' couldn't help you if he tried to.. defective protection.
I'm better than Venom.. he's fronting clutching delicate essence.
here where we 'meet' with 'many different tastes', like a delicatessen.
he's spineless like jellyfish if 'Venom's deep and "phosphorescent".
you teach english lessons? please.. the wrong profession.
I've come with a hundred slick rhymes for smooth tung,
never repetitive.. still writing new ones..
we're spillin out guts on the double, like two blunts..
but he'd see magic dragons after just a few 'Puffs'.
..sunk and snuck under the table "dawg" ..an abused pup?
I rise, shine and summerize life.. like the June sun.
with May'tricks spilling wisdom like the kid with the spoon does.
I give you a reason to write like a muse does.
I've got the proper love for rap, like you just knew lust.
but you still seem to mistake battle rap cyphers for group hugs.
you're knocked back more often than Robb Mack ..your new crew sucks.
we've all seen you 'break' and we've laughed at your moves bruv..
apart from all your fumbled punches, a few ducks.
just a few ducks, but lie'an be deep ..like a zoo flood.
he isn't fly.. sleeping on this 'til his roost's rushed.
his 'haze'll' get better when he 'leaves' like he 'grew nuts'.
a thief; he'd climb on top of 'Holmes' and enter, like Cruise does.
his flows only ever get 'red' once a month ..like a womb gushed.
ey, wait..
Smooth tung..
I'm down with all kinds of lines.. from original Anticon to Kool G Rap,
from old school crews like Ultra Mag' ..Kool Keith's rap,
to new improved deep rap ..even crude street acts.
so trust me when I say this.. Smooth' seems wack.
hey Smooth'.. I don't hate you but I'd trade you for Tre's crew.
..if only those you replaced would replace you.
this place aint been the same since you came though.
brought along Venom' like inviting in snakes too.
not dope since we lost Mo' and lost Zarex,
seems we maxed then dropped to Robb Mack's texts
Quickill might even have been there in the background.
if he was, did he leave? if he did, is he back now?
hah.
damn.
you're all kinda timid, tired with it
..why exhibit mild lyrics?
why try? why strive? your entire style's minor.
all of your similies are simple like Tyler.
Smooth' thieves online, so ofcourse he likes 'rob' 'Mac'.
plus.. compared to that soft rap he's not bad.
what, fam? huh ..just in this playin'?
except for the exceptional, nothing is sacred.
Ven' came to me for advice.. then didn't listen.
I punched his *ss hard and now it's Ven'triloquism.
Robb Mack..
stop that.
I flipped hot raps since a kid flipping pog caps..
I'd got a lot of game since a kid ripping ROM hacks,
saved the state of play, fixed it up like it got patched,
easy to see like I shot FRAPS, leaving finite life like Robb's cracked.
I mean, seems he aint even P.C.
and on the real yeah, it seems weak..
a mysogynistic homophobic chauvanistic violent type of mindless writer,
who gives hiphop a bad reputation and deprives the cypher..
ey, wait.. Robb Mack.
like I already said, stop that.
ask Smooth' ..this aint safe if it gets in the wrong hands.
see.. he tried to touch what wasn't his and he got smacked.
seems that you're here to get 'contacts'.. Robb Mack,
you're the primary reason that the 'site's gone bad.
you're the type of mindless writer that should've got banned.
please.. clean it up before you censor all our drops fam.
the site was shut down because of weak people like Robb..
with more crappy crass trash than wise rhymes in lines dropped.
so 'f***' your bad language coz I mod and I disapprove..
that "f" was for 'fail' then the three stars are his review.
but I should've just ignored little Robb Mack..
I've written him these lyrics and he can't give a lot back.
Ven' and Smooth were crew once, seems that now it's Smooth' and Mack.
hah. just imagine them collaberating on thier future tracks..
Mack tries for a while, finds a concept and jumps..
but yet again it's just blood and corpses and stuff.
then Smooth perceives a deep beef where there wasn't one ..so runs and weeps.
he leaves Mack back at the pad writing his trite rhymes 'bout guns and streets.
then his dude Smooth' returns.. further comes to see..
just some of the many reasons they can never run the scene.
Mack's in the back, says he's busy chopping bodies up..
comes back with a ham sandwich, like "sorry bruv".
then Smooth says "dude.. time to write."
waits for him to finish.. thinking 'time to bite'.
just imagine the crew.. the two feuding..
pre-emptively presenting their case for who blew it.
truth: Smooth did, stupid ..or perhaps Mack.
any one of you could be in their crew. you're all that wack.
all that everyone else ever said.. ignore that trash.
Smooth's Quick' to Rob' Venom', but you're all as bad.
you're all as bland. who disagrees?
see, seems you're not here to give me scripts to read..
don't stretch yourselves, just warm-up when I bring the heat.
yall aint fit to write rhymes. a few of you aint fit to breathe.
Mack blindly tries to write about life like he's seen something, he keeps bluffing.
Smoothtung once 'liked' his script so now he's blushing. shook, he keeps coming.
seems that Mack ought to be more careful who he's trusting..
Mack.. fam.. Smooth' only approves of you when he needs something.
he always needs something. eternally lacking.
..and he really thinks I can't verbally match him?
hah. damn. he isn't even worthy of smashing.
he aint on point with that cursory rapping.
Quickill.. sorry, I keep forgetting you.
always sat on the sidelines seeming destitute.
quit this, kid.. I'll make a seperate thread for you,
where nobody has to even see your generic attempted feuds.
uh, peace.
sorry if I missed anyone out.Last edited by _SBU; 07-23-2012 at 07:40 PM.
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I went to jail, didn't leave.. and I don't steal.
I don't aim to please.. and I won't kneel.
..Frames seeded seain' most "angles" like boat keels.
sever wires leading to the phone to provoke feel.
Chris I'm my own deal.
I don't need my act saved.
my rap's great . i didn't ask to have my back had get your facts straight.
I hope you're a bastard - for your dads sake.
you act fake.
you have class if you kidnapped on grad day.
I loath, spurn handsomely in your direction..
'i DO hate you' but in turn don't fancy affection.
I've made dues;sold the gates to a surge of nexus
Gained control of your rank like I poll the world's census.
Its not the fact that the rap battle is adding amplitude.
But the man and whom he's willing to slam to prove his brand is truth.
And everything he represents and upholds so well.
Men who resent and try to prevent extent of ones they don't know themselves.Last edited by smoothtung; 07-25-2012 at 03:33 PM.
