Famous Old Painters

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    PointZero said:

    Default Famous Old Painters

    Liberty has led the people
    down the tunnel
    Deep in the heart
    of glowing red ink

    My mind is hurting,
    my heart is breaking
    When did they have
    the time to think?

    Oh,
    those famous old painters
    Got nothing on me
    Those famous old painters
    Still caterwaul,
    all, all

    The sun glows hot,
    the stars are misty
    Doctor Gachet
    has called it a day

    My mind is bursting,
    up to the seams
    Caught in the museum
    inside my dreams

    Those famous old painters
    Got nothing on me
    Those famous old painters
    And they caterwaul,
    all, all, all...

    Signs etched
    in the distance
    Covered in oils
    and turpentine

    Flushed over with color,
    shading and details
    Only a fool could find...

    Oh, those famous old painters
    Got nothing on me...
    Those famous, famous old painters...

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    It seems an age has gone and left me
    In the dust and ash of time
    When was the last time I had seen you
    Before I was left behind?

    They are all advancing on me
    Their rebel yells have reached my ears
    They all scream as pillars crumble
    Down onto the body of ignorance and fear

    I shall wait for death to take me
    It is the only way to save me
    Oh, love can you see me fading?
    Hear my voice from far away...
     
  2. KathyB said:

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    I like this nice descriptions...

    this is just my opinion but I think you can find a better word then "caterwaul", I don't even know what that means....lol
    Kathy
     
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    PointZero said:

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    Quote Originally Posted by KathyB View Post
    I like this nice descriptions...

    this is just my opinion but I think you can find a better word then "caterwaul", I don't even know what that means....lol
    Thank you! And yeah.. I'll have to revise it now. :P