We Stand Together

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  1. Experimentalist's Avatar

    Experimentalist said:

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    Hi guys, been a while since I posted, joined a band recently and I am now writing for them, this is my first new set of lyrics. enjoy!

    if you ever feel like your lost
    ill find you and help you across
    and if you fear the light has gone out
    ill catch you before you fall down

    cus me and you we're two of a kind
    breathe the same air, share the same mind
    spending our days frustrated
    and spending our nights getting wasted

    we stand together
    lost in forever
    seeking revolution
    peaceful retribution
     
  2. Doug Denslowe's Avatar

    Doug Denslowe said:

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    Simple,to the point,I like it!Here,see if this helps you;

    If you ever feel like your lost
    I'll find you and help you across
    And if you fear the light has gone brown
    I'll catch you before you fall down.

    One word change,but,to me,makes it so much stronger.I like simple songs,but I like like simple rhymes even more!
    Welcome Back!