Sometimes

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  1. 2numbers said:

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    I have these words
    I so much want to say
    I think about her eyes
    Everything goes away
    I have these thoughts
    I have to share with her
    Then I see her smile
    And wonder what the thoughts were

    It's roses and lace
    My hand on her face
    Lips pressed to lips
    Memories of how they taste
    We were everything
    We crossed the lines
    It's all about love
    Sometimes....

    It's hard without you
    Wishing you were still here
    We can't even talk anymore
    So much I need you to hear
    Please just answer me
    I don't need I love you
    Just to hear you say "Hey..."
    Show me the dream was true

    It's roses and lace
    My hand on her face
    Lips pressed to lips
    Memories of how they taste
    We were everything
    We crossed the lines
    It's all about love
    Sometimes....

    I don't know what I'm saying
    Just letting it all out
    Trying to figure this....
    Figure it all out
    I've shown you everything
    I have nothing to hide
    And I'll keep waiting
    Waiting by your side

    It's roses and lace
    My hand on her face
    Lips pressed to lips
    Memories of how they taste
    We were everything
    We crossed the lines
    It's all about love
    Sometimes....
     
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    Doug Denslowe said:

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    Numbers,I'm glad,like Rickey,you're submitting "good old fashioned love songs".Although I do like the heavy,dark,grimy stuff,it's nice to see the lighter side of your writings,once in awhile.This is real good,especially the refrain.
     
  3. 2numbers said:

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    Thank you, Doug. That means a lot!
     
  4. Debeaux said:

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    I have to agree, really strong chorus. It's all about love , sometimes, no truer words were ever spoken. Great job
     
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    Kerri Faye Yates said:

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    Wow, this is really awesome!
    ~Kerri Faye
     
  6. Peter Both said:

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    A very nice love song, waiting to be sung, over and over.