A Man Needs A Woman

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  1. Jim Colyer's Avatar

    Jim Colyer said:

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    No one knows a man needs a woman better than a man who does not have one.

    I got my job
    I make enough to get by
    My bills are paid
    I own my own place
    But every night when I come home
    I look around and I'm alone
    A Man Needs A Woman

    I got some friends
    We hang out together
    It's baseball games
    Karaoke bars
    But when they turn out the lights
    And you've got to face the night
    A Man Needs A Woman

    This loneliness surrounds me
    As I rise from my bed
    The Waffle House
    Has become my second home
    They turn around to look
    As I walk through the door
    They're desperate
    I see it in their eyes

    The sun comes up
    I tell myself I must go on
    Who could she be?
    This woman that I need
    This emptiness inside me
    Is more than I can stand
    A Man Needs A Woman

    Jim Colyer ascap
     
  2. Doug Denslowe's Avatar

    Doug Denslowe said:

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    The line before the Song Lyric says it all.
     
  3. KathyB said:

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    Quote Originally Posted by Doug Denslowe View Post
    The line before the Song Lyric says it all.
    Then how come thats not the chorus of the song?

    Oh Doug he also wrote the song AABA...which you said you were trying to do.
    Kathy
     
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    Doug Denslowe said:

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    Quote Originally Posted by KathyB View Post
    Then how come thats not the chorus of the song?

    Oh Doug he also wrote the song AABA...which you said you were trying to do.
    It appears that the difference is a line at the end that doesn't rhyme.Have I got that much right?(after reexamining the lyric,that's not all that's different from ABAB.If I was working with a guitar player I could probably figure it out better.(or find a better excuse!)
     
  5. KathyB said:

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    Quote Originally Posted by Doug Denslowe View Post
    It appears that the difference is a line at the end that doesn't rhyme.Have I got that much right?(after reexamining the lyric,that's not all that's different from ABAB.If I was working with a guitar player I could probably figure it out better.(or find a better excuse!)
    The last line of each paragraph is the title of the song. It doesn't have to rhyme.
    Kathy
     
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    amaryn said:

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    Hi guys If a song needs a strong rhythm rhyme is easier, otherwise DOUG(!) a strong bassguitar or/and a fine drumsupport.
    In popmusic (and often rock too) rhyme seems to prevail. Metal , rap, trance and punk are a different story, I'd say.

    By the way: loneliness is a theme which needs another 1001 songs: it's a frightful thought especially realizing how many people
    suffer from it!
    Thanks, Jim, for "attacking" it openly.