hi, i'm new here. english is not my native language. Im interested in writing so much but i need some help.
I have problems with my grammar sometimes and I want to work on it. thats why i registered here. I'll post some of my lyrics here and hope there is some good man who could say just "wrong" or " correct" or just a "sh*t"
i feel the world is not enough
unawareness brings me out in huff it's really ****ed up
i think my mind is corrupt and life is a trap
with no way out I try and try but can't wake up
we tied by lies drowned in pointless struggle
greed blinds our eyes it's like never ending battle
vital flame fades in rain puddle
jeleausy pumps our veins we miss the light in tunnel
i'm hollowed out
human hologram
spirit cursed till
twenty first hollowed gram
i dont know i think it sounds bad