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Hey, I'm requiring some help for a quick review of my text, just to see if there are any mistakes (I'm French and want English texts)
It's for metal songs that you can listen here if you wish: https://soundcloud.com/gab-daud/sets
Please keep in mind that this is not the final sound yet.
The automatic corrector doesn't see any mistakes except "Poki" which is a company name and "Diga a mesa" which is a mix of languages.
Thanks for your time!

The texts:

Gone
____

Gone
Will I remain gone

My eyes hint I don't listen anyway
Should I deny that I just nod to save the day
I realize that I don't have anything to say
Nothing arises I don't care I'm many miles away

Will I remain gone

Alone embrace your past before decay
A last regard it can't sting enjoy the ride
Add it some lies change a bit I can't stay on the road
Past in disguise I don't care I'm many miles away

Why be here while I can
Dream anytime anywhere
Dude can't you get
We're gonna need some psych here
Too far too late
My mind get out to whistle

Away
It feels like home when my mind's flying away
Wasted time for you
Don't do the same
Don't you dare

Gone
Will I remain gone

Now I design a future time a play
Maybe delusion will becomes real on a good day
It is unwise to enjoy being lead astray
Not a surprise I don't care I'm so many miles away

Why would you try in vain
Pretend you are unaware
Dude can't you get
We're gonna need some psych here
Too far too late
My mind get out to whistle

Under curfew
I can be with you if you need me
I still care for you tell me what you want
I'll share my view
Tell me maybe I can help you if I am given the right to
Conceive this through
I believe I'm starting to get lost
To think caused me to be blast away

Away
It feels like home when my mind's flying away
Wasted time for you
Don't do the same
I am away
It feels like home when my mind's flying away
Wasted time for you
Don't do the same
Struggle to be careful


Protest
_______

Fascism all around the game
You can play
You are the crowd don't act as preys
Don't get it wrong
Cynic or cool are not the same
Be social
You think they lead don't be that scared
We'll direct ourselves

The force that you unleash is not enough to rectify our world
Shame on us if we misconceive the power in our world

Another day another shame
In plain sight
We should decide to make them pay
Don't wait too long
Nothing in mind won't make you sane
They coerce you
Don't think one sec you will be spared
Can we stop them now?

The force that you unleash is not enough to rectify our world
Shame on us if we misconceive the power in our world

You and all the rest of the folks should take the power right now
I'm trying something your idleness does nothing for improvement
Go all the way go inside the melee
Go all like if it was the last days
Go all the way go inside the melee
Go all like if it was the last mother****ing day

The force that you unleash is not enough to rectify our world
Shame on us if we misconceive the power in our world
The force that you unleash is not enough to rectify our world (can we do something now)
Shame on us if we misconceive the power in our world (can we try hard this time)

Protest more
Contest power
Protest more
Contest power
Protest more
Contest power


Broadcast
_________

There are signs
That you're abused
Turn it off this feeding of you
Don't resign to this ritual
The more you watch
The worst for you (Stay away)

Time to kneel, praise the mighty content shown
Shown pastille tells the mind to cease
I can feel time slowing down and down
Down until everybody freeze

There's a reason why we inform you
The paradigm that turns your brain inside out
You'd better listen to the story made for you
On you to decide to trust

I don't mind
I don't need you
The last one I need I hate you
Recognize I can't fit in
Being stuck in your beliefs
No thank you (Farewell)

Watch with zeal, gaze on whoever has crown
Crown reveals how should think the bees
Queen's appeal raised by a bunch of clowns
Clowns distill whatever to please

There's a reason why we inform you
The paradigm that turns your brain inside out
You'd better listen to the story made for you
On you to decide to trust or freak out

I'm going to jam the signal
The signal that makes you stay
I will tell you things that you need today, incoming cheap offer, time limited
I will be inside the signal
Before your eyes made of gray
Time to reply, what you want for free, see me naked, save your life
No

Noises
Don't bring the level down wait a second don't turn off (don't turn me off)
Nightmares
Can you live without my oversized wisdom (super wisdom)
Charming
Don't trust in the broadside we can see what's going on (what's going on)
Toss it
With all the knowledge stored, all the things we know (the things we know)
Please can you ****ing go

There's a reason why we inform you
The paradigm that turns your brain inside out
You'd better listen to the story made for you
On you to decide to trust or freak out
(Broadcast) There's a reason why we inform you
The paradigm that turns your brain inside out
(Broadcast) You'd better listen to the story made for you
On you to decide to trust or freak out


Jewel
_____

I'm waiting deep inside you
Already digging some view
Grooving wand made me a child of wonder (Pure warm core)
Along the way

You break out loud
You little core
Already on your way to glare
Wanting to be more

Pure jewel
Made of metal
Strongest core by far
Says everyone
Pure jewel
Made of metal
Has no sour nor scar
No shame

Glossing geek has found this array
Discovering some gem
Hoping that his young child will survive him
Hide! Try to break inside them
Move around, spread your insides of wonder (pure warm core)
Along the way

You became so proud
You little core
Gems like you are meant to be shared
Last for evermore

Pure jewel
Made of metal
Strongest core by far
Says everyone
Pure jewel
Made of metal
Has no sour nor scar
No shame

A wonder for
Who made my core

Another shiny gone in the rain
Yet to discover a gem again
Another shiny stone in a vein
Yet to explore again and again


Poki
____

Now!

Home step inside
Try to heal your suffering mind
You're home
Safe for now
Gone previous mind
Keep your creepy scenes outside
Just go
Playful now

Honey
Tell when we can play
Can we do
Poki
Let us be strong enough
Cause we can

Now!
With friends that would be so cool

Cold enterprise
Made to sell for fast rise
Our gold
Deal right now
Bald advertise
Made for kiddies in king size
Young crowd
As cash cow

Daddy
Tell when we can play
Can we do
Poki
Let us be strong enough
Cause we can
Mummy
Tell when we can play
We want some
Poki
We never have enough
Cause we're kids

Time runs out in the end of the final round
Eyes on the screen in case I might stay if allowed
The game is going to end end I tell you out loud
You came in front **** you I can't see
I can't watch the screen
He's on his way to rise
He's gonna take the head
I can't stay

Now I'd ****ing like that
If only I could say my ****ing word
So I could deny your crazy promptness
You're severely dumb
You pathetic god

Come on!

Daddy
Tell when we can play
Can we do
Poki
Let us be strong enough
Cause we can
Mummy
Tell when we can play
We want some
Poki
We never have enough
Cause we're kids


Both and neither
_______

I have no self esteem
Do I

Understatement time
I don't remember, that's fine
What was my last mind
I'm not so sure down inside
I should declare that to be fair
The best I cannot find out

I have no self esteem
Do I

Under siege you are
Now please surrender, don't fight
There's no need to lie
Just say you did not decide
I want to share that I don't care
This way I could think I am...

Young again
Young again

I have no self esteem


Messed
______

I know that your order
Might believe I'm sad and insane
In time I'll believe you
We don't know when
A strong smell of sweat flies (bizarre)
Underneath lies a lack of care (caused by something unknown)
Does this means that I don't (retard)
Like you at all (please explain the unknown)

This is the pain we don't know
My mess
So whine, keeping say
Just about the pain still unknown
Madness
No one can explain
Is it a lie
The pain

I can't see why you're dismayed
So far you've never been so close
To meet my very real self
You don't know me
Despite all that, this mess (bizarre)
Doesn't hint I should stay alone (caused by something unknown)
To be over the issue (retard)
Is doable (please explain the unknown)

All about the pain we don't know
My mess
So whine, keeping say
Just about the pain still unknown
Madness
No one can explain
Is it a lie
The pain we don't know
Care less
So whine, keeping say
Just about the pain still unknown
Madness
No one can explain
Is this a lie

Don't waste your time I don't really crave
To be superficial
Will you assess me on such cliches
You're part of the problem

Now I have everything so wrong
In silence brood and then decide as I'm
Aware that you bring the level down
The final leaves us both in shame

Pain we don't know
Care less
So whine, keeping say
Just about the pain still unknown
Madness
No one can explain
Is this a lie

I must condemn your way to behave
Call me an asocial
My mess obsess you with such a craze
Not smart, this is so lame

You just care for the show
Stop to look outside
You may look for the soul
Such bad behavior
You just care for the show
Stop to look outside
You may look for the soul
Not for the odor


Rob
____

Open a door
Dream a last time
I wonder
I failed my goal
Nonetheless you don't care
Brother in soul
Jump in if you care

Jump in the river
What else knowing that
I am your son
Diga a mesa the way
I can use you
Brother in soul

Retain no more
Give a last thought
I wonder
Ask for your role
Whatever you can share
Brother in soul
Jump in if you dare

Jump in the river
What else knowing that
I am your son
Diga a mesa the way
I can use you
Brother in soul
Jump in the river
What else knowing that
I am your son
Diga a mesa the way
I can use you
Brother in soul

Raise your head
Animate my dream
Join
Can we simply get a new start
Don't debate
On the way you miss time
Will you really just
Walk away
How could you
Walk away
Please think twice as you
Walk away