my 2nd lyrics- the day you were gone

every day we woke up beside each other
but now its not you its always another
man that i see beside me in my bed
i just cant get the fact that youre now dead
its crowling inside so very slowly
i cant take it anymore im so lonly
every night in my dreams saying youre right behind
where are you, i cant see you im loosing my mind

since that day im not alive
im going crazy i cant survive
you were my heart and my soul
and since youre gone this world's a black hole
why did it happend in that special day
i remmember it like it was yesterday

i tryed to get over you but i dont
always a voice inside me saying i won't
our life is not going according to plan
and now im married to another man
but you always will own my heart
i'll never forget you, without you im falling apart

since that day im not alive
im going crazy i cant survive
maybe we just werent meant to be
maybe this is our destiny
its like it was yesterday i remmember
but ill never forget it, the 11th of september

who ever has any suggetions for making the lyrics better id be happy to hear and for spelling corrections ty

Every day we awoke beside each other
But now it's not you it's just another
The man that I see beside me in bed
I just can't comprehend that you're now dead
It's crawling inside so very slowly
I can't take it anymore I'm so lonely
Every night in my dreams saying you're right behind
Where are you, I can't see you I'm losing my mind

Since that day I'm not alive
I'm going crazy I cant survive
You were my heart and my soul
And since you're gone this world's a black hole
Why did it happen on that special day
I remember it like it was yesterday

I tried to get over you but I don't
Always a voice inside me saying I won't
Our life is not going according to plan
And now I'm married to another man
But you will always own my heart
I'll never forget you, without you I'm falling apart

Since that day I'm not alive
I'm going crazy I can't survive
Maybe we just weren't meant to be
Maybe this is our destiny
It's like it was yesterday I remember
But I'll never forget it, the 9th of September

thanks
what do you think about the lyrics ?

and i meant the 11th of september lol what a big mistake :S

Hi again.

Sorry I don't seem to be able to message you from my own thread.

Wondered if you might have any suggestions regarding a good (Enlish speaking) Estate Agent in Athens? This seems to be my most urgent concern at the moment.

Cheers, Kat.

Really emotive lyrical work there, I guess writing this has helped you in your grief somewhat. I love what music can do!!

thanks
have any ideas to improve ?

This is really good.....Heartbreaking to lose the one you truly love