Sin Eater

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  1. 2numbers said:

    Default Sin Eater

    so tired
    i keep trying
    lift you up
    you keep lying
    take away
    all the pain
    sink deeper
    while you gain

    love me
    as you use me
    hate me
    when you know me
    feed me
    all of your lies
    no one cares
    when the sin eater dies

    its ok
    what you have done
    i hide it
    from kingdom come
    the pain
    will be my own
    show me
    what you have never shown

    love me
    as you use me
    hate me
    when you know me
    feed me
    all of your lies
    no one cares
    when the sin eater dies

    forgotten
    wither away
    shining angel
    no one today
    disappear
    nobody cries
    cloudy day
    sin eater dies

    love me
    as you use me
    hate me
    when you know me
    feed me
    all of your lies
    no one cares
    when the sin eater dies
     
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    Jim Colyer said:

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    I like the short lines and your original way of expressing discontent.
     
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    Kerri Faye Yates said:

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    this definitely deserves more praise. what a gem!
    ~Kerri Faye
     
  4. Matt6660 said:

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    I have to tell you I really like this. As I was reading it I had music playing in my head to go with it. Really good man keep it up!!
     
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    Teshka said:

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    Quote Originally Posted by Kerri Faye Yates View Post
    this definitely deserves more praise. what a gem!
    I totally agree, Kerri thank you for bumping this up from the 'archives' bcs i totally missed it the first time around. 2numbers this is really amazing, love it!!
    Music is what feelings sound like
    Listen to the Love
    ~♥♥~