Hi everyone! I've just registered here and I want ask some reviews on my new lyrics. So how I am Russian I am not so good in English.
This is a metal song.
The Maze Of Souls
Verse 1:
One of long forgotten fears.
The human souls still wander here.
The darkness reigns for many years.
For thousands souls it's prison here.
Verse 2:
This prison is without walls.
So easily to lose control.
Most of human don't believe.
How frightfully this place is.
Verse 3:
Exhausted souls try to escape.
In the darkness lost the way.
While they stuck it here.
They've remembered, forgotten fear.
Chorus:
You got lost inside my halls.
Beware me I see through walls.
I'm your master. You are my dolls.
Welcome to the maze of the souls