Take me Away

[Chorus]

Take me away

To another place

A totally different space

Take me away

[Verse 1]

When it's ending and getting darker

I know my world could not be getting any brighter

When it's over and there's nothing left

I know that I can leave it all and start all over

I'm losing patience,but I'll keep waiting

You've got that touch that has been getting to me lately

My heart be taken as lights be fading

Tonight*I'm gonna live like it's my first time baby

[Pre chorus]

Beyond the lights,beyond the night There's something about you that keeps me alive

It's never the same when your in my way

Cuz baby your love could

[Chorus]

Take me away

To another place

A totally different space

Take me away

[Bridge]

I never asked for this,but I guess it's been written for us to find lightning

Not that I don't want this,but I just can't hold myself and can't get enough with you

[Chorus]

Take me away

To another place

A totally different space

Take me away

I really like your "boxy" approach to writing lines. There's a clear pattern which I am always a fan of.
Also, this emphasis on night creates an atmosphere I dig; it's mysterious in a way!
I easily imagine this fiting to some RnB or Indie-music. It's great!