So, this is my first post in this area of the board. JUST began writing lyrics for some new melodies that my guitarists have come up with, and this is the first song that has come together.
Working on putting a title to this work as well, I encourage any and all suggestions for that and the lyric itself. Thanks!
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Tonight I'm leaving
Better judgment behind, I'm gone
Maybe this time I won't get attached
I'm not coming back
So before I leave, let me thank you for all that you've made me
Memories
I see what I must live without
My blood will run cold when I wake up alone, I know
I want to make everything better
And go back to the way we were
I swear I can fix this, make it all work out
But you're too good for me
Anyway, I'll move on somehow
And I know I'm bound to die alone
Guess I was the blind one after all
So cursed with a black heart,
Someday I'll find this was all on me
You'll never remember anything
And you'll always forget my name
But will it really matter?
Cause after all, it's done just the same
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Untitled at the moment..
Last edited by AllApologies; 12-29-2008 at 02:17 AM.
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Bump?
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it's good. my favourite part is the last paragraph.
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Good song. Maybe call it "Moving On" or "Leave You Behind". I liked it.