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  1. AllApologies said:

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    So, this is my first post in this area of the board. JUST began writing lyrics for some new melodies that my guitarists have come up with, and this is the first song that has come together.

    Working on putting a title to this work as well, I encourage any and all suggestions for that and the lyric itself. Thanks!

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    Tonight I'm leaving
    Better judgment behind, I'm gone
    Maybe this time I won't get attached
    I'm not coming back
    So before I leave, let me thank you for all that you've made me

    Memories
    I see what I must live without
    My blood will run cold when I wake up alone, I know

    I want to make everything better
    And go back to the way we were
    I swear I can fix this, make it all work out

    But you're too good for me
    Anyway, I'll move on somehow
    And I know I'm bound to die alone
    Guess I was the blind one after all
    So cursed with a black heart,
    Someday I'll find this was all on me

    You'll never remember anything
    And you'll always forget my name
    But will it really matter?
    Cause after all, it's done just the same
    Last edited by AllApologies; 12-29-2008 at 02:17 AM.
     
  2. AllApologies said:

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    Bump?
     
  3. mystery123 said:

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    it's good. my favourite part is the last paragraph.
     
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    Daniel Terragar said:

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    Good song. Maybe call it "Moving On" or "Leave You Behind". I liked it.
     

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