Just Free-runnin

I hear the pounding of my shoe meetin the street
I'm working for the stage so stop and take a seat
Cant compete with me I step on everyone to become elite
I'm too adept too trained I will accomplish this given feat

Legs are pumpin muscles strainin to the maximum
Cardio is perfection hard trainin stride addictive as opium
Passed the first test chillin in the back just waiting for the rest
My style isn't bland its up and has my own personal zest

Free-loadin is what your good at so just let it show
Crippled rhymes with bad schemes you cant keep up
You need to work on the way your life will flow
You may beat me so it seems but you crawl as I jump

Wipin the sweat off my face as you begin to bawl
Lifes end met stop going to the past no longer can stall
Cliff comin up I'm ready to fly as you begin to do your jump
You fall fast out of my sight I'm soarin high, you shoulda trained chump.

Nice stuff, I like it. I like the rhymes and I feel it flows quite well. It's also a very 'talkative' style by the looks of it if you get what I mean which is good

Thanks Jfam!!! I appreciate the criticism man = )

your vocabulary is really good in my opinion and the rhymes are good

Thanks guys!! I appreciate all the feedback! I may start an actual rap now with verses etc. See what you guys think!

I look forward to it