Say You'll Stay

This still feels a little awkward. Maybe someone can help with a line or two? E.g. 2nd verse 4th line? And I think it needs another verse to make the point of the first line. I dunno, I'm just stuck...

~ ~ ~

You were too crazy to be loved
But it came so easy anyhow
I didn't know which way was up
But you had the song and I sang it loud

So when you called the other night
I got up from my dusty grave
Caught the faintest trace of light
Brushed a cobweb and breathed your name

-Chorus
There is no need to say
We can't relive the day
But I'll ask you to stay
Anyway
Say you'll stay anyway

I've got nothing now to claim
In all the sweetness that is you
But every moment calls your name
And every lie is a lover's truth

I must be just as crazy as you
But I don't really seem to care
We can't make an old thing new
But it's cold as hell in that grave over there

(Chorus x2)

If it's too much to ask
We can both wear a mask
Just say you'll stay
Anyway
Say you'll stay anyway

~ ~ ~

Never thought i would be a fool
but i was searching
for a decent melody

Hope this helps.

Awful, as usual.

One more thing Moon, if my stuff is so average how come its my lyrics that get the most views on this forum and not yours? Also, how come people send me PM's for advice on songwriting and also saying that they feel I could help them progress as a writer?

Just a thought for you and your hurt feelings.

You can be so funny sometimes .... Have you gone back and looked at my history? Or did you make a rash assumption on absolutely nothing at all?

And hmmm well let's see ....... it seems like I said at the very beginning that it still felt "awkward" and could anyone offer any help ....

But I guess you did the best you know how to do. So thank you for your opinion, lol

PS: There was another guy on this site with an overblown ego who ended up being banned. His ongoing need to criticize others and brag on his "accomplishments" eventually turned against him, because his ego just couldn't handle the blowback from various people that he continually insulted, and one night he just lost it. Poof. He was from Manchester btw, a musician, so I guess it's even possible that you know him.