No name yet, help me out?

Well, where do I begin
Open the door and let you in?
Or leave you out in the cold
And regret it until the day I grow old?

I used to love your face so much
Your golden hair, your midas touch
The way your eyes twinkled like
The brightest star on the darkest night

You let me down, you broke my heart
My friends had told me from the start
That you were one to avoid
You have done this all before

So who is wrong? You or me?
I said the world is there to see
You went and saw it on your own
And left me broken and alone

I wish that we could start again
for you that would be heaven sent
but this time love, youve gone too far
You went and crushed my broken heart

So for once I will stay strong
And leave you out where you belong
On the street, nowhere to go
Enjoy your life I hope its low



I just wrote this in about 5 minutes, lets hear what you think and Im open to ideas for improvement or even new verses or chorus added to it

In my opinion, I reckon the fourth stanza would serve as a good chorus.
And you could call it Broken.
Dunno if that helps, but I really like what you've done already!!

Hmm...wonderful lyrics, the continuous rhyming makes it all flow. But a name, that's hard to think of. I was thinking something like "Fallen Star". If you're a musician I think E flat minor would be good for this song.

Just changed a couple of things, what do you think ?