Incompatible

http://soundcloud.com/alex-harbolt/incompatible

The walls are closing in and there is nowhere left for me to hide
No matter where you go you can't escape what's on the other side
And as the waters flow your branches grow but in the wrong direction
So incompatible you can't seem to establish a connection

We've gone so far astray
Why can't we find the way?

Are you really listening, or do you even care?
Can you hear the whispering of the spirits in the air?
Can I tell you what I'm thinking when I feel you near?
I just want you by my side for our remaining years

Let's take flight
Leave time behind

Let's go to the astral plane, I want to see your face
Baby we could go insane and lock our hearts in space

We're getting older now
Our world is upside down

Time is coming to an end and I have yet to start
Come and show me how to mend the pieces of my heart
Take me to a distant shore that only we can find
Lead me through that open door where I can free my mind

Take me home
I'm so alone
Why must it be this way?

I really like your lyrics, I think you're creative and they tell a story really well. Your lyrics show feeling and it's clear what you're on about in your song, at least I think it is. I picked up a love lost between two people that once had a strong bond kinda feel? Hope that's right, either way, they're really good As a song writer myself who posts on here, i noticed that not many people reply to things I don't think, but it's nice to see your work being noticed I hope you get many more positive replies mate Also, it's nice seeing a differetn style of lyrics other than my own Keep it up dude!! xx Sky

This is really interesting, and I love the line "So incompatible you can't seem to establish a connection", keep writing

"So incompatible you can't seem to establish a connection"
NICE PIECE

And as the waters flow your branches grow but in the wrong direction
So incompatible you can't seem to establish a connection

Love that part, probably one of my favourites of yours
Keep it up man

I like it! XD

http://soundcloud.com/alex-harbolt/incompatible
The audio.
A rough demo of just vocals and acoustic.